Long After and Long Before

Long before we met
I loved you

though countenance as yet unclear;

long before I ever heard 
your voice, sensed I a perfect fit 
out-there, somewhere
for my very eclectic ear -- 

Destiny is the word she used,

the old woman, with cards and
tea-leaves – a White Witch her
advertised claim: in a tent, at
an outdoor carnival somehow
I can’t say, she even knew your name…

Long before the first kiss sealed

with embrace made promise

with vow made sacred

perhaps before the first spring came
tossed its dingy veil, made colorful
beguile...into us spoke scented petal-like 
blossoming smile

long before the first step
and endless seeming mile -- 
season given time to entrance,
great power to smudge and erase


Perhaps long before
God had written His best romance -- 
imagined human hearts, couplets of 
tender poetry, song and joyful dance -- 


perhaps far back, when God
first considered love, make sketch
and model design -- made man’s visage
and form resemble His own Divine…

gave creation license to copy, 
to fondly reline or trace – for 
sometimes careless figuring gave wash 
of forever grace – a lonely God, releasing
His kingdom, wanting only to freely
share, breathing life into lungs of 
clay beings, declaring each his
child – offspring, royal heir

Perhaps even then, that far back
in God’s perfectly caring heart,
you and I were resident tenants
there, as angels reside in heaven above
wherever we travel, goes with us 
signed lease of eternal love -- 

though having transient souls predetermined 
never long us to dwell apart – such depth of union
like God’s glittering universe ever expanding

as those endless fields of stars linked together
twinkly hand-in-hand, love -- time’s radiant, inextinguishable 
source and core -- God will keep us sparkling brilliantly close

adhered to His Loving Heart

Now, long after and long before

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Date: 10/15/2023 9:08:00 PM
This is such a classic of love. A love that existed long before and long after. A highly soul stirring poem where God's boundless love and planning are exalted."Perhaps even then, that far back in God’s perfectly caring heart, you and I were resident tenants." This is an uplifting thought. Love the whole poem, especially these lines.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa; a joy to write this one, all heart. Blessings my friend. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 10/15/2023 5:45:00 PM
wow I will fav this beauty Joe, two stars both in heaven and on earth, perhaps even through rebirth, over and over again, love this
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2023 6:32:00 AM
A FAV! You made my day. Thank you, Vie. I have flash memories of past lives -- I am certain others do also. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:52:00 AM
Rumi said the minute I heard my first love story I started looking for you, but little did I know you were already inside me... God is inside us and is our first love story.. as highlighted in your wonderful poem... always a joy to read you..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:55:00 AM
Hi Si; wise words. Inside us, around us enfolding...we travel from God, toward God...to eventually realize, we had never left Him nor Him us. Thank you my friend. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:32:00 AM
Perhaps even then, that far back in God’s perfectly caring heart, you and I were resident tenants there, as angels reside in heaven above wherever we travel, goes with us signed lease of internal love ---how splendidly descriptive! It is the power of destiny and love!!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay; I think it is Gods wish and place for us all. For me, it has got easier to understand with age -- if I am wrong, nevertheless it will make parting seem less fatal.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:19:00 AM
Oh wow, this is really such a beautiful and exquisite poem where you've described the spiritually deep connection that one feels with his/her beloved and senses that they have known their love since many lifetimes.. Even during the times when they both resided as tenants in God's heavenly abode.. Wow, to feel such a connection with someone is truly a bliss..Your wordplay is very dreamy and whimsical here "spoke scented petal-like blossoming smile", "twinkly hand-in-hand, love -- time’s radiant"
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:36:00 AM
Hi Hiya. You are such a romantic...love it. So wonderful to be a poet, to live one's poetry. Whether imaginary or real, with poetry it is always better. Blessings my friend.
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