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Long After and Long Before

Long before we met I loved you though countenance as yet unclear; long before I ever heard your voice, sensed I a perfect fit out-there, somewhere for my very eclectic ear -- Destiny is the word she used, the old woman, with cards and tea-leaves – a White Witch her advertised claim: in a tent, at an outdoor carnival somehow I can’t say, she even knew your name… Long before the first kiss sealed with embrace made promise with vow made sacred perhaps before the first spring came tossed its dingy veil, made colorful beguile...into us spoke scented petal-like blossoming smile long before the first step and endless seeming mile -- season given time to entrance, great power to smudge and erase Perhaps long before God had written His best romance -- imagined human hearts, couplets of tender poetry, song and joyful dance -- perhaps far back, when God first considered love, make sketch and model design -- made man’s visage and form resemble His own Divine… gave creation license to copy, to fondly reline or trace – for sometimes careless figuring gave wash of forever grace – a lonely God, releasing His kingdom, wanting only to freely share, breathing life into lungs of clay beings, declaring each his child – offspring, royal heir Perhaps even then, that far back in God’s perfectly caring heart, you and I were resident tenants there, as angels reside in heaven above wherever we travel, goes with us signed lease of eternal love -- though having transient souls predetermined never long us to dwell apart – such depth of union like God’s glittering universe ever expanding as those endless fields of stars linked together twinkly hand-in-hand, love -- time’s radiant, inextinguishable source and core -- God will keep us sparkling brilliantly close adhered to His Loving Heart Now, long after and long before

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Date: 10/15/2023 9:08:00 PM
This is such a classic of love. A love that existed long before and long after. A highly soul stirring poem where God's boundless love and planning are exalted."Perhaps even then, that far back in God’s perfectly caring heart, you and I were resident tenants." This is an uplifting thought. Love the whole poem, especially these lines.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa; a joy to write this one, all heart. Blessings my friend. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 10/15/2023 5:45:00 PM
wow I will fav this beauty Joe, two stars both in heaven and on earth, perhaps even through rebirth, over and over again, love this
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2023 6:32:00 AM
A FAV! You made my day. Thank you, Vie. I have flash memories of past lives -- I am certain others do also. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2023 7:11:00 AM
a truly impressing and uplifting poem. I loved how you described 'long after and long before.' So many things are written in the stars to speak. Love is inside us, placed there by God. Outstanding!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 7:16:00 AM
If we let down our guard, the lesser self, God's love is what man can be certain of...never to doubt. Thank you, Sara. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:52:00 AM
Rumi said the minute I heard my first love story I started looking for you, but little did I know you were already inside me... God is inside us and is our first love story.. as highlighted in your wonderful poem... always a joy to read you..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:55:00 AM
Hi Si; wise words. Inside us, around us enfolding...we travel from God, toward God...to eventually realize, we had never left Him nor Him us. Thank you my friend. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:32:00 AM
Perhaps even then, that far back in God’s perfectly caring heart, you and I were resident tenants there, as angels reside in heaven above wherever we travel, goes with us signed lease of internal love ---how splendidly descriptive! It is the power of destiny and love!!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay; I think it is Gods wish and place for us all. For me, it has got easier to understand with age -- if I am wrong, nevertheless it will make parting seem less fatal.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:19:00 AM
Oh wow, this is really such a beautiful and exquisite poem where you've described the spiritually deep connection that one feels with his/her beloved and senses that they have known their love since many lifetimes.. Even during the times when they both resided as tenants in God's heavenly abode.. Wow, to feel such a connection with someone is truly a bliss..Your wordplay is very dreamy and whimsical here "spoke scented petal-like blossoming smile", "twinkly hand-in-hand, love -- time’s radiant"
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 6:36:00 AM
Hi Hiya. You are such a romantic...love it. So wonderful to be a poet, to live one's poetry. Whether imaginary or real, with poetry it is always better. Blessings my friend.

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