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Lonesome In a Desert

Although I hold a trace of fading reveries How quick it drifts like sand wiping out the glow, My heels roam a barren land through ominous hours Raked by self- isolation mercilessly; where grief Could never become an option in this soddy-ruddy place, When night erases me from folds of reason That once honored wise and knowing thoughts: A roughened ground is now sucked up from the earth’s clay-- The kind that's hard to siphon root to leaves, And I tremble alone on mounds of wired briar and nettle… Until a white hawk chants its desert tune,' whit, woo,' flinging Ghastly shadows across a moonless sky; that in Breaths of near danger, this heart gradually awakens To wrap me in some sacred presence within eve’s oasis … An intercepted light nourishing my thirst for hope, for courage As if heaven bestows that shimmer I find Through my inner eyes…just one more time. For Edward Ibeh: I Wander The Desert Alone Contest ----------- 10/14/2018

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Date: 10/16/2018 10:55:00 PM
Riveting write, Nette.. your lonesome darkness only made the hope that eventual came surprisingly bright! Your lines are models of mastery!
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 10/14/2018 7:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.
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Date: 10/14/2018 7:41:00 PM
Your thoughts hold depth, and such meaning. This is emotional and beautiful, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/14/2018 5:08:00 PM
Love the line "When night erases me from folds of reason"
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:26:00 PM
Very deep, i think many wander alone in the desert at some point in their life...
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:55:00 PM
I was touched by your barren soul in the desert. I wish you well in the contest, nette!
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:24:00 AM
A well written verse in a style that you write so well. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 10/13/2018 8:49:00 PM
Touching work here! Reminds me of the song by the rock group America - Horse with No Name. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/13/2018 8:46:00 PM
Awesome a winner that I see.. Nette.. your writings always inspire me..:)
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Date: 10/13/2018 7:55:00 PM
Magical...until a white hawk chants its desert tune.
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Date: 10/13/2018 7:33:00 PM
Nette Clouds...what I see in your poetic journey is something I admire...a "spirit quest" the difficult to express but ever present aura connecting us with the universe...well done!
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Date: 10/13/2018 6:35:00 PM
This poem is beautifully penned and uplifting Nette. Just gorgeous! Best of luck in the contest, tho I hardly think you need any! : )
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Date: 10/13/2018 4:08:00 PM
You bring about the isolation and hardship of lone journey in the desert through the sights and sounds in your splendid words.. wonderfully. Excellent poetry, nette. Best for a win at the TOP.
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