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Lonely World

How populated this lonely world often feels with so much warm flesh living cold and stony. Some days, we ache for someone to hold us, smile into our eyes like they wholly know us. As humans, we talk and talk our searching words though others grasp only their perceptions heard and live unaware that their walls thus occurred. Hearts all desire an embraced soul revealing of where’s and why’s behind the how’s they’re feeling. Such tries manifest puffed effects, sky floating on breezes society contaminates with numbing subliminal fears to which we succumb. All emphasized in society’s vise pounds false perceptions that comfort some lives, allowing them to safely hide in boxed alibis where their dreamy feelings lay to perhaps die. Deep is our need to be known and understood as a person of unique meaning and worth. Seems to me, hearts may be seeking in blurred rote for meanings rarely clear after emotions smoke. ... CayCay July 28, 2019

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Date: 8/23/2019 12:01:00 PM
I saw your poem high on best poems chart--glad I clicked on it, CayCay. So much depth in your words of wisdom..a superb write..I am saving it as my FAVE.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/24/2019 6:55:00 PM
It means volumes to me that you faved it, Vijay - thank you very much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/20/2019 1:31:00 PM
Very nice and too true.
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Date: 8/13/2019 5:47:00 PM
Your poem is intensely beautiful CayCay! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Life is not as complicated as many think it is. Most all of us want what you have expressed. For that need for love is inherent in all of us. I love your wonderful poem and it is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/11/2019 9:14:00 PM
Lovely poem, CayCay. Strong message. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/7/2019 12:54:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win with this great write.. I have sent you an ASAP Soupmail today ~
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Date: 8/6/2019 9:07:00 AM
a nice write CayCay. Congrats.
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Date: 8/6/2019 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, CayCay.
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Date: 8/5/2019 1:58:00 PM
Well done CayCay. Congrats!
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Date: 8/5/2019 1:00:00 PM
This was excellent writing Cay Cay, some amazing word choices, congrats on placing in this very difficult to judge contest!
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Date: 8/2/2019 9:13:00 AM
U cut so lose 2 the truth here. Caycay. I sould text ur name as kk. I better stop all this or lose my charge. I e got one more soupmail 4 u.
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Date: 8/1/2019 8:46:00 AM
I like how you interpreted the song. You have provided much to ponder here. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/31/2019 11:16:00 AM
What truths you speak! Well done and crossing my fingers that you do win this one, Beautiful. Panagiota
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Date: 7/30/2019 9:31:00 PM
Oh, if only what we said (and wrote) went to the receiver's heart and soul in the exact place it originated from in us, but sadly, misunderstanding and erred interpretation are more the norm. What an excellent take on John's theme and the song, and a superb write - I just love this! Going straight to my favs, CayCay, with the best of wishes for the contest, (I've yet to tackle it!). Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
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Date: 7/30/2019 7:36:00 PM
Great take on the song...people don't seem to be in touch with others much these days, at least not in person...you really gave the song a profound vision! Well done Cay Cay :) hugs
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Date: 7/30/2019 2:20:00 PM
This is really profound. So many 'Whoa' lines: "We talk and talk our searching words though others grasp only their perceptions heard" about sums everything up for me. This is so much the reality of what we feebly refer to as 'communication.' Terrifying truth here, CayCay. A FAVE for me. Bravo. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/30/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thank you very much for leaving such an encouraging message that touched my heart. I'm always appreciative of your comments but don't always have time to express just how much so I'm telling you now the how much is HUGE! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/29/2019 4:03:00 PM
Grand write CayCay, full of great imagery with full of insight too Fine penning indeed. Have a great day, poetry hugs, Gordon
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 7/30/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon - your comments make my pen, muse and I feel warm all over, and we all love that feeling! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/29/2019 3:51:00 PM
i like your spin on the theme, cay... very original and well done... huggs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 7/30/2019 6:08:00 PM
There's the Nette face! Good to see you, always - and I do so value your comments, thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/29/2019 2:12:00 PM
A great interpretation. A winner for sure!
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Date: 7/30/2019 6:10:00 PM
If I've learned anything on Soup it's that winning is never for sure but having comments that support and believe in a win is a win in itself to me. I thank you, Jeanne, for your encouraging comments, I do, I do, I do. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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