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Lonely Boy

A lonely boy once loved a lonely girl, the distance between, a whole other world. The love that they shared was that of a dream, but could not touch something that was not seen. Now he thought of her while she thought of him, in a make believe kingdom made for them. This far away place where these lovers lived, a fantasy come true, all would they give. A plan they did make to leave their own lands, to come together, forever to stand. The day they each left their home and their life, was the day they became husband and wife. Two are now one in a land filled with love, in a kingdom for them made up above.
10/22/18

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Date: 12/2/2018 7:40:00 PM
Wren, enjoyed reading in this fantasy poem, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/3/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Eve have a wonderful evening.
Date: 11/27/2018 4:04:00 PM
back with congrats!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/27/2018 6:12:00 PM
Thank you. P.s. have a blessed evening.
Date: 10/23/2018 6:10:00 PM
That's quite a beautiful sonnet; well penned.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you ML for reading and commenting on my poems.
Date: 10/23/2018 8:05:00 AM
This is a great sonnet... it flows really well and a lovely love story..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you silent 1 appreciate your comments. Have a blessed day.
Date: 10/23/2018 1:29:00 AM
wow lovely loving sonnet /// none do slacken, none can die..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Mahtab have a blessed day.
Date: 10/23/2018 12:08:00 AM
I really like the title and the line “now he thought of her while she thought of him”
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 10/22/2018 10:48:00 PM
I love this die and go to heaven ending! Nicely done, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Caren.

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