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Locked Within - Chopped Contest

Locked within memories of happy times. Fun we had that night Bought a new cell phone, hate wearing new pair bi focals. broke a pencil signing name on a playbill for" Tarzan of the Apes" Dated Eighth September Twenty 0 One "Used Cell Phone, Pair bi focals,broken pencil,a playbill dated 8 Sept 2001."

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2014 4:01:00 PM

this is amazing Seren, just love it...

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 4:57:00 PM

Hello Harry how are you , so nice to see you again....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/5/2014 1:38:00 PM

I would just give it to you here but since my photo is in my biography can you imagine the number of women that would be writing me? Don't answer that question Seren I can dream can't I.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 2:53:00 PM

You ninny Naurice lol

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/5/2014 1:37:00 PM

Excellent take on the contest Seren. My poetrysoup is freaking out on me. Everytime I try to send soupmail it gives me System error 500. As soon as I can get through will give you my email to avoid these snafus.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 2:52:00 PM

Of course Maurice, when you get my soupmail you will see my ipad having fun with words and an apology following. Lol...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:30:00 PM

Etheree are a nice way to go , Seren. I think this is the contest that is about 9/11, right? I bet he would like to see some hint of that catastrophe in the poem. anyway, this one is very difficult. You are brave to attempt it. I am staying away. haha

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 2:49:00 PM

Andrea this is the chopped contest don't think 9/11 involved I might be wrong. If it was I missed it...ah well....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2014 8:11:00 AM

Very creative Seren....I see you still have Etheree on the brain...or that one brain cell....hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 10:20:00 AM

Lol,Tim I need that one cell recharged now....you wore it out .....Seren.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2014 4:35:00 AM

Very clever write Seren. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/5/2014 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Jan, can't wait to read yours....Seren