Lock It Up

I stare at those locks oh so red
Flame buoyant hair's rare on a head
It's your special spice
That to touch would be nice
But I'm stuck with the wife till I'm dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anaya Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 2:11 PM
She must have been quite a dish! Smiles
Beaufort Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Anaya, she was not bad. It's very interesting to observe people and appreciate their beauty. Kind of like walking live art...and the museum is free.
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Oh hope she doesn't see this one. Joyce
Beaufort Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Joyce, it's OK. We laugh about all this stuff together. If I did anything, she would throw me out of the house!
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 7:18 PM
came back to this one. MY favorite I think of the more recent ones. When I have more time, I want to explore your many others and see which ones I like best. YOu are a limerick king! Luv, andrea
Beaufort Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Based on your AV, this ones for you!
Delacroix Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 10:20 PM
Like the title, Duke, quite appropriate. Well written, seeing the humor in here. Well, I've done it. I wrote my first Limerick, thanks to you. So have a look at "Days of Thunder" if you have the time, tell me what you think. Best wishes, Caroline.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Am laughing profusely at that last line.. great write Duke.. Caroline was right.. your poetry is terrific... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Chuckle, chuckle. Great testimony of your faithfulness. In the height of being tempted, you stood your ground. Keep the Limerick lines flowing to help us chuckle and look twice at situations. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:17 PM
get your eyes back at home! funny!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:25 PM
ahahaha, I LIKE This one alot, Duke, I meant that I believed when I first came to the club, you were one of the first people I read and made a comment to . It was someone posting almost all limericks. It was probably you unless someone else here is doing many many limericks. Yes, licorce is AWESOME. Have you had licorice ice cream, it comes in black AND blue! haha. Luv, andrea
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