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The Fountain of Living Waters flows, Ready to quench our thirst, Why do ye hew out broken cisterns? Broken cisterns that burst; Drink from the Fount and be satisfied, It will become a well, Water springing to eternal life From your being will swell. Flowing like a river, swift, gentle Lifting hearts with godsends, Soothing with absolute forgiveness Kindness’ ever defends Drink of His life, His light, His sweet love Know the meaning of grace Silence every doubt with His promise Feel His perfect embrace Syllable count: 9.6.9.6 1st and 2nd stanzas are Jo’s 3rd and 4th stanzas are my own Jeremiah 2:13 - For my people have committed two evils; they have forsaken me the fountain of living waters, and hewed them out cisterns, broken cisterns, that can hold no water. John 4: 13,14 - Jesus answered and said unto her, Whosoever drinketh of this water shall thirst again: But whosoever drinketh of the water that I shall give him shall never thirst; but the water that I shall give him shall be in him a well of water springing up into everlasting life. Collab with Jo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel April 4, 2023

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Date: 5/3/2023 6:34:00 AM
A fabulous job with this collaboration with Jo. You pens meld seamlessly Gina. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/2/2023 10:01:00 AM
Gina, congratulations on your first place win in your collaboration with Jo. I love the thought that blessings are "Godsends!" Beautiful and truly inspired. That is a line that will stay with me to think about, pray about and meditate on! You have that marvelous ability to leave me with delicious bits to chew on for a long time! Thank you for that gift sweet friend. Sending you blessing of living water and hugs!!!
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Date: 5/2/2023 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Love It. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/2/2023 1:21:00 AM
Many wrote on this topic, but yours was by far the best, Gina:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 5/2/2023 1:50:00 AM
Wow. I'm so humbled by your kind words. just wow! I do like the poem and was delighted to share the pen with you, friend. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Date: 4/6/2023 6:26:00 AM
Love this! By coincidence, I used the same poem for the contest :)
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