Living a Creative Life

(this is not a comment on gun rights in U.S.A. I am from Canada where we do not face the same challenges. rather i seek to speak to the creative mind. the search for the peace in our hearts. the gun is not literal but represents the violent soul. i hope i have not offended anyone.) 


almost everything that wraps the bone structure of the hands is responsible for its sense of touch touch, the neck of a guitar a lover’s hair via a pen through and to the end of a paint brush our sensitive our creative side flows through our hands the first time i held a gun my skin melted off than the tendons muscles veins arteries followed fell off the bone stripped to its empty frame i held the gun with a raw naked bone pulled the trigger with a cold dead hand i never held a gun again the flesh grew back in peace and love my creative voice is alive again travels easily through my brand new hands
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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:08 PM
wow, Armand, I tried to find one after September 7 that i still had not read. There must be a few because here is a real gem i have found. This is what free verse is all about. finding an amazing "Idea' and providing an image or symbol (in this case, the hand) to get your idea across effectively. i just love this one. Guns are hideous things. We would all be so much better off without them in the world. A FAVE and Soupmail.
Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Maurice, your poetry not only is beautiful, but it looks beautiful on the page. Peace is everything.
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:08 PM
thank you you are always kind. your support means a lot to me.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:58 AM
This is exceptional Maurice!
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:42 PM
you sir are exceptional.
And Gerhard Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 4:00 AM
very peacefull and well written !
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:41 PM
thank you. you are very kind.
Yaseen Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:03 AM
my creative voice is alive again travels easily very beautifully written, enjoyed reading it..
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:41 PM
thank you Malik
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