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Living a Creative Life

(this is not a comment on gun rights in U.S.A. I am from Canada where we do not face the same challenges. rather i seek to speak to the creative mind. the search for the peace in our hearts. the gun is not literal but represents the violent soul. i hope i have not offended anyone.)
almost everything that wraps the bone structure of the hands is responsible for its sense of touch touch, the neck of a guitar a lover’s hair via a pen through and to the end of a paint brush our sensitive our creative side flows through our hands the first time i held a gun my skin melted off than the tendons muscles veins arteries followed fell off the bone stripped to its empty frame i held the gun with a raw naked bone pulled the trigger with a cold dead hand i never held a gun again the flesh grew back in peace and love my creative voice is alive again travels easily through my brand new hands

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Date: 2/20/2015 7:08:00 PM
wow, Armand, I tried to find one after September 7 that i still had not read. There must be a few because here is a real gem i have found. This is what free verse is all about. finding an amazing "Idea' and providing an image or symbol (in this case, the hand) to get your idea across effectively. i just love this one. Guns are hideous things. We would all be so much better off without them in the world. A FAVE and Soupmail.
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Date: 9/10/2014 2:11:00 PM
Maurice, your poetry not only is beautiful, but it looks beautiful on the page. Peace is everything.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 7:08:00 PM
thank you you are always kind. your support means a lot to me.
Date: 9/10/2014 8:58:00 AM
This is exceptional Maurice!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 1:42:00 PM
you sir are exceptional.
Date: 9/10/2014 4:00:00 AM
very peacefull and well written !
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 1:41:00 PM
thank you. you are very kind.
Date: 9/10/2014 2:03:00 AM
my creative voice is alive again travels easily very beautifully written, enjoyed reading it..
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 1:41:00 PM
thank you Malik

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