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Live and Lets Live

You run, I run, each one in his own pace no need for a rift, one man to his lane when I run into you to hit your face then life gets a red eye and goes insane your way of life may be full of grace that does not mean you hang us on a crane if I like I can look and embrace but let me be if I see as mundane you want a law for all of us sir you ban me to dine in a cool bar b’cos you want to lead and be a star? I may bare wood, rice or even broom in your view they are not the best and doom don’t dare on men’s ways or else hate will loom

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Date: 7/25/2016 9:31:00 PM
Very nice and very deep....
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Salehi
Date: 6/15/2016 10:39:00 AM
Profound and true with many valuable lessons to teach dear Funom! A seven!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so so so much Demetrios
Date: 6/6/2016 4:25:00 AM
Loved your poem, Funom. A beautiful poem with a wonderful message. ~karam~
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Karam
Date: 6/5/2016 9:36:00 PM
Awesome write. Funom!!! Life will be beautiful if we follow our respective lanes and don't intervene!!!! Lovely write with lovely message///7
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:53:00 AM
Yes Anand, I just hope we all see it that way
Date: 6/5/2016 5:32:00 PM
If more men would leave others be it would indeed be a more peaceful existence.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:52:00 AM
Yes, peace is what we want in the world, but as it is, there are more men who are just born to look for trouble and bring turbulence to existing peace. Thank you for your visit my dear friend.
Date: 6/4/2016 2:35:00 PM
Live and let live is a slogan from Alanon. I have done my share of 12 step programs. Hate and anger may drag us down, forgiveness and love will erase the darkness! Fantastic sonnet Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:51:00 AM
Yes Robert. So so true. Sometimes, when you decide to play the fool, the person on the other side would want you to remain the fool...
Date: 6/4/2016 6:28:00 AM
This sonnet is absolutely awesome my dear friend, Funom! I love it and I'd immensely enjoyed the read! Perfect 7 my dear friend! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Galeo
Date: 6/3/2016 5:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this..
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry Horsman
Date: 6/2/2016 12:07:00 PM
Oh la, I don't think that you'd hit anyone in the face without justification. Then again, when one tries to make another feel they are less, it may be because the culprit lacks of self esteem. On the other hand, the problem is not yours to contend with. Have a great day! Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much Mikki
Date: 5/31/2016 6:04:00 PM
Interesting work that is very descriptive..Sounds like there is some discord between you and someone for sure.Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:45:00 AM
Yes Sara, that is the emotion behind the poem. Thank you very much for your time here
Date: 5/31/2016 5:18:00 AM
enjoyed this one Funom, thank you for sharing... ~Linda~
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much pretty Linda. Its been a while
Date: 5/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
Sonnets are a challenge! Lots of tension and discomfort floating in this one - good job in using modern thought in a very old style. - Jesse
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Jesse Day

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