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Live, Laugh, Love

Little babies are born Into a world that has a Vicious, 'Dog eat dog!' Environment. Long days pass Amid the chaos of war. Ugly scars mar beauty, while Gaiety is almost non-existent. How can life be so cruel? Listen to the call for peace, to Overcome ruthlessness. Visualize a better life, where Everyone lives, laughs, and loves. ~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/17/2010 4:20:00 PM
And don't think that you are alone in that sentiment. Yes, Virginia, there is a consensus on that. I guess that you get that a lot around Christmas? But it seems further than ever, doesn't it? Thanks for your comment and regards from Gerard.
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Date: 7/16/2010 6:24:00 AM
This message is epic and too often ignored, for it is the doom of men to forget. But time does have a way of correcting the mistakes of our fathers as the pendulum swings. Your poem cuts to the heart of the cancer. Thank you for honoring my poetry with your comments.
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:42:00 AM
You turned a great acrostic into a great and rhythmic poetic. You were in fine poetic form and exercised beautiful prosodic control. Nice job Virginia. tom
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:41:00 AM
You did a great acrostic into a great and rhythmic poetic. You were in fine poetic form and exercised beautiful prosodic control. Nice job Virginia. tom
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:39:00 AM
Excellent entry Virginia ..and good luck in Tirzah's contest.. much truth in every line.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:12:00 AM
Great entry for the contest.. All the best, Wilma
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:57:00 AM
A very powerful message in your acrostic. Great entry for the contest. Best of luck ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:54:00 AM
well done piece, good luck in contest
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