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E Form - Elegy Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France  Written 7/17/2024

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“I see a white dove fly across the sky everyday as it wears a dazzling rainbow halo; one day as the morn unfurls I will be that white dove .” Quote by Poet Sister, you are so dearly missed. What brought us together was your birth, my little sister. I was there when you took your first breath and held you in my arms. You grew up being independent, outspoken, strong, and mischievous. I watched you protect those that needed protecting. I watched you smile as you enjoyed the giddy feeling when you met your first beau, the love of your life; those butterflies’ fondness in the pit of your tummy that made you pretend to be a petite, helpless little girl. And, as you grew up and married, had your own children; your love nurtured and kept them close to your bosom. My life was a little lost when your husband moved you away across the country after the children left the nest. You were not my baby-sister anymore, but my friend. Ah, but we maintained a connection, stayed in touch and got caught up, being very chatty for hours on the phone, our conversations about anything and everything. We missed each other. You lost your husband, and you got very ill. You decide to leave us all and be with the Lord. I was not able to be there by your bedside and hold your hand and say my goodbye. I miss hearing your voice and our long conversations. 7/17/2024

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:27:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful and emotional elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, love the quote too, Constance
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Date: 7/23/2024 5:51:00 PM
An indescribable sibling love is very beautifully illustrated. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2024 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Little Sister" is a lovely yet sad write. Great quote/picture. So Sorry.... Heaven has many angels in it. Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 7/23/2024 6:48:00 AM
Back with congrats, dear Eve!
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Date: 7/23/2024 5:00:00 AM
this is surely a loss profound. i wish for you to find your little sister in heaven, eve.
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Date: 7/23/2024 1:32:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Congrats on your high placement.
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Date: 7/22/2024 5:53:00 PM
Oh my goodness...I may need to take a break from reading these elegies! My poor Heart hurts so much for you. I too have a sister this close to me and cannot imagine going on without her. God bless you and comfort you! This is written with such heartfelt love it touches the reader with your sorrow. Xoxo
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Date: 7/19/2024 8:17:00 PM
Sorry for that great loss. I am always thankful for who is here, still.
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Date: 7/18/2024 3:29:00 AM
Dear eve, i cant imagine how painful it must have been saying goodbye to your sister. I cant imagine living without my twin sister. This is so sincere and so heartfelt and well expressed. Sending you my deepest condolences and may her soul rest in peace and love. And i really love your quote too. Gorgeous and deep. Best wishes dear eve.
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