Little Miss Ladybug

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a ladybug landed on my knee how lucky could i be she stayed put a little while as if she'd flown a mile pausing just a wee bit for a rest hardly time to build a nest goodbye my little lady bug i didn't even get a hug AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on April 15, 2020 for contest WRITE A RHYMING POEM FOR FUN sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER Originally posted on October 19, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/21/2018 9:53:00 PM

You clearly attended charm school, Line. The poor ladybug evidently did not! Precious poetry! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/21/2018 9:58:00 PM

LOL thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Gershon.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/20/2018 7:38:00 PM

A sweet verse, a sweet little ladybug, Who can say no to a ladybug? A really cute, short read. Really liked it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2018 8:09:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Sandra.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/20/2018 7:31:00 AM

Aw. This is so sweet, and a quick read. Children may like it, but I love it. "pausing a wee bit for a rest". I too have been the recipient of a ladybug land/fly off visit and they are quick.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2018 9:32:00 AM

Thanks fro your lovely visit and comment, Caren.