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10/28/2024 for Jill Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Little Jill Page

Little Jill Page
Longed for the stage,
Heaving a dramatic sigh;
She clutched at her heart,
And blasted a fart,
And said, "a divine presence am I!"

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Crystol Woods

Date: 11/22/2024 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations David! We're never too old to laugh at fart jokes! Lol xo

David Crandall
Date: 11/22/2024 6:29:00 PM

haha, thanks Crystol!

David Crandall
Date: 11/22/2024 6:27:00 PM

haha, thanks Crystol!

Brian Davey

Date: 11/19/2024 9:42:00 AM

This one was my fav from this contest and I am glad to see it with top honors, congrats

David Crandall
Date: 11/19/2024 4:31:00 PM

Thank you Brian!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/18/2024 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations friend

David Crandall
Date: 11/18/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Paghunda!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/18/2024 1:33:00 AM

Dave, this made me LOL...too funny! Congratulations on your top win. Thanks for entering my contest. Charlie

David Crandall
Date: 11/18/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Charles - it was a fun contest!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/31/2024 9:00:00 AM

LOL dave. This is priceless. Jill does just fine without Jack. Still giggling, elle :)

David Crandall
Date: 10/31/2024 11:10:00 AM

Thanks! That's how I envision Jill - not to be outdone by Jack.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/29/2024 7:39:00 AM

WOW! Pass the air freshener. Good one, David. Janice

David Crandall
Date: 10/29/2024 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Janice!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/28/2024 12:45:00 PM

Hahahaha your biting humor is quite unexpected! Good luck in the contest!

David Crandall
Date: 10/28/2024 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Karne, Like I say, I'm an innocent victim of the rhyming dictionary :-)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/28/2024 10:16:00 AM

Hello David, Alright, that was cute and hilarious at the same time. It is great to see something light and humourous. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

David Crandall
Date: 10/28/2024 10:19:00 AM

Thanks Daniel! I noticed you didn't use the word "classy". It's just unfortunate that "fart" rhymes with "heart" - lol.

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