Get Your Premium Membership

Little Girl

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Darren White.


LITTLE GIRL “Come,” she says, and beckons. I sit with her, we’re playing LEGO dollhouse, Bob the Builder. Barbie, Play-Doh, drawing. “There, a birdie, lift me?” “Darling, I can’t, a second, And I’ll get my chair, we go out if you want?” “You are big, WALK! You are no baby! You can walk and you can talk” “But I AM a baby! You push me outside Together we ride and see the birdies?” She eyes me suspiciously. And then smiles deliciously. “You are big baby But I am mummy and I carry you. We go see the birdies, yes?” I nod, lift her chin, caress Her crown of hair, so fair! “You carry me.” She carries me everywhere, She is in my heart Even when not physically there. She will always be a part Of me. My little ray of light, Always there, I think of her During the longest night. *** Originally written in Juli 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/4/2016 1:48:00 PM
parent and child---so charming in its loving play... well done, darren
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/4/2016 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette, I love her very much :)
Date: 11/4/2016 7:27:00 AM
Oh Darren you are truly blessed to have this little ray of sunshine in your life this is such a precious little poem I love it:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/4/2016 8:45:00 AM
Hi Jan! Yes, I am very happy to have her in my life. Sha has a 18 month old brother and the both of them are the lights of my life :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:55:00 PM
My youngest bundle of energy is six and it is games non-stop...I love it though as I do your poem.
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/4/2016 1:56:00 AM
Thank you! And yes, she is a huge bundle or energy, after I have seen her I need a day in bed to sleep, hahaha. But I would never want to miss time spent with her, ever.
Date: 11/3/2016 3:35:00 PM
This is utterly precious, and you own my tears in this moment!
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/3/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Paloma... That is a big compliment :)
Date: 11/2/2016 10:00:00 PM
I am going to be a cryin' any minute. Reminded me of my only girl baby, my lil sister and you just touched me tender and left me emotional. Aw, so good, Darren, so sweet and so good ... CayCay
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/3/2016 7:19:00 AM
She'said my sweet little niece, and yes I love her very much :)
Date: 11/2/2016 4:02:00 PM
Wow! What a lovely read, excellent.........A.M.
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/2/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things