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Little By Little

Little by little the red bricks begin to fall apart he is getting ready to take the staircase to heaven she watches from a window the hunch of his back outside the garden is in disarray but full of dew Her conscience whispers gently in her youthful ear this was once the house that raised you girl She walks over to the porch hammer in hand and as the sun sets in the sky like a rouge rosette she works aside green ferns, old as dinosaurs Assaulted by a leaky roof and an unsteady door she walks in, "Grandpa ? " he answers with a sigh then slowly drinks her in, with two electric eyes.
7/15/2020 Contest name: Decaying House Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 7/27/2020 4:39:00 AM
Such a touching muse this is. It melts my heart with those tender emotions Pixie. Congratulations on your win! :) Blessings
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:25:00 AM
Pixie, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:04:00 PM
I love the emotion in this piece Vie. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2020 3:16:00 PM
Wondrous write and my compliments to your honorable win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:13:00 PM
very well written Pixie, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2020 5:23:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Good luck..
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Date: 7/15/2020 7:43:00 AM
this is so cool. Thoroughly enjoyed! My best to you in the contest Pixie, xo, mo!
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