Little Al

Little Al came out to play
With triolet and roundelay.
Boisterous John with resounding whoop,
Skipped along with stick and hoop.
That night when John lay down to sleep,
He fell into a slumber deep,
While Al lay restless in his bed,
Sorting the poems filling his head.
John laughed at Al for listless way,
But which one had more fun that day,
John with his roundabout at play,
Or little Al with roundelay?

Each child was made in different mold;
One quiet and the other bold.
John ran to make his body strong.
Al longed to give the world a song.
Brave John will grow so big and tall,
He may be one to save us all
From danger should it come our way,
His future forecast by his play.
As Little Al composed, he knew
This world will need some beauty too.

Next day Mom took John's hoop away
Gave it to Al to run and play.
She put John on the stoop to stay,
Until he wrote a roundelay.
She said "When you grow up you'll find,
You need your muscles and your mind.
You must both share in work and play
With roundabout and roundelay."


Won 4th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:19 AM
What a grand imagination you have, my poet friend. Congratulations on your success in The Life Of A Fictitious Person contest sponsored by: Matt Caliri Smiles, Dane Ann
White Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Mother knows best- Congrats Joyce Here's a Smile
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Joyce, this was well deserving of its success in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 12:23 PM
What a clever poem, well done, Joyce! Congratulations on this winning piece! Love, Carrie
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Joyce, This is so cute. I'm glad I came back to read some more of your poetry. I like this one alot. Smiles, Dane Ann
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:51 AM
The mother was wise to encourage John to assimilate some of the finer qualities Al exhibited in his writing. Neither boy should be confined to one activity -- how smart Mom was to give the hoop to Al and tell him to "run and play." Smart Mom; great poem, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Hey, is this a rondelay within a rondelay, Joyce? It sure is nice. Luv, Andrea
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