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Literary-Induced Trip

Literary bridge to nowhere Without compass, pen as guide Through rambling discourse O'er every jagged meter Free, rhythymless strides Unconsciously retreading again Stumbling every step Into vapid, lyrical retreat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2010 8:39:00 PM
Very interesting poem. Congratulations on your big win, STephen. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:50:00 AM
wonderful, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Stephen in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:11:00 PM
CStephen...very well done!
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Date: 9/23/2010 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your 4th place win, enjoyed the trip ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 9/23/2010 1:00:00 PM
Stephen congrats on your win in Nikko's contest ;)
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Stephen
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congrats Stephen on your win in Nikko's contest.. an awesome poem.. enjoy your succes and sweet victory with luv...
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:32:00 AM
Hi Stephen ^_^!! I really enjoyed how you took on the challenge with this literary trip of yours-- wonderful metaphor you used here (just an extra 'y' in rhythm less, hope this helps) --super congrats on your 4th place win! -- nikko :)
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