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September- 5- 2025

Listen to the Wind Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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LISTEN to the Wind

“Wind and Waves eternally speak to us, sometimes in hushed murmurs and sometimes in violent roars. We do not know what they speak. They may be trying to convey the calm and the fury of Nature in turn”- ~ By Poet


 I hear a wind whispering from the hills
      It comes down tickling the clean woodland rills
    From far is heard the frightened murmur of leaves
   As it pounces on them like wayside thieves
          It shakes the branches of flowering trees
    And their petals drop like confetti in the breeze

   Over hills and trees, it loves to skip and stray.
            Always in motion, never inclined to stay
    It moves unhampered over streams and field
     With no resistance to its might, they simply yield
         Like a child, it romps over the shady bowers
    In its gentle touch, dances the gleeful flowers
         Sometimes it steals furtively like a lover
     And disappears kissing our cheeks under cover

  It comes capering with a lilt and a swing
         We feel joyous when we hear it merrily sing
    From an unknown hide out it comes like a sprite.
     It always makes us feel its vigorous might

    Listen to the wind, it may have something to teach!
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La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest, Listen to the Wind, with your beautiful poem, I love the image and quote also, blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write and quote again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Well written. Many emotions, including calmness, may be conveyed by the wind. The poem's whimsical and lyrical language evokes the wind's various states of mind—gentle, ferocious, and fleeting—and reminds us that the wind, in all its enigmatic glory, teaches us something. Congrats on your win
La France Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Valsa, at the top of the page under poetry soup logo click on links for the members page and the head will take you to your admin page, Constance,
La France Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Your welcome
George Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you so much Constance for this timely help. Finally I got it.
DiMino Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 11:50 AM
"Always in motion, never inclined to stay" -- a lesson for all of us to apply, what we don't use, we lose. Play, love, and write! "Sometimes it steals furtively like a lover And disappears kissing our cheeks under cover" -- Love it! Good luck in contest. May have a winner here. I entered, but like everything else I do, I read the directions after the fact:))
Narain Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Nicely penned. Wind conveys many moods, stillness and other vibes. GL in the contest.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 6:41 AM
beautifully penned poem, filled with your Valsa grace. You've captured the essence of wind in its various forms..fabulous contest contender!
Upadhyay  Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Playful and graceful, this poem captures the wind’s many moods gentle, fierce, and fleeting reminding us that even in its mystery, it always carries a lesson.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 11:12 AM
What a wonderful write and quote. Great tree picture. Yes, the wind will teach us. "Good Luck" We both did this one.  Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............
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