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LISTEN to the Wind Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 
 
Date written 4 September 2025

 

LISTEN to the Wind

We cannot direct the wind, but we can adjust the sails," by Dolly Parton ,

Hot summer was over. A mighty wind roared
     out of nowhere bringing back the nasty dark clouds.

Where did the wind come from? No one really knew.
I did not know nor did I care, so long it brought
     no rain, for then the wind would wet me all over.

That's when I saw a woman huddled near a bar.
Raw wind whipped around, so detrimental for her.

I could see her trembling with cold; her clothes tattered.
She was quite near of getting hypothermia.
     The wintry wind was of no actual help.
     I got her in the bar where at least there was warmth.
Two women helped and I paid for a tot of scotch.

I left the bar, the wind was like a breeze now.
I wandered round the area, heart-broken,
      the cold breeze wrapped itself around my heart.
Its gust echoed in my heart calling for Rose.
How could I find her in such a wind-swept city?
The swirling wind insisted on its forceful call.
Listen to the wind, it churns her name in my soul.

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Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:08 AM
I can see why this beautiful poem placed in first, it is mysterious and sad. I wish there was a continuation of it, that Rose was found in the wintery wonderland. Very beautiful and stirring Victor.
La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my contest, Listen to the Wind, with your beautiful poem, I love the image and quote also, blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write and picture. A wonderful ending. What a true/great quote... Have a blessed day with your win...........
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:22 AM
Back with my congrats, Victor
George Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Dear Victor, back to your sweet poem with Congratulations on your first place win.
Kitchin Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Victor, a great captivating emotive poem. Congratulations on your first place win.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 10:40 AM
A very emotional stirring poem Victor, an enjoyable read… Beryl
Upadhyay  Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Tender and evocative, this poem turns the wind into both a harsh trial and a haunting messenger, carrying compassion for strangers and an unending call for lost love.
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 2:32 AM
Very dramatic and emotive. I think she'll love your write. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
George Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:10 AM
Even the wind calls out her name. The cold wind, though causing chill and making people tremble, knows your heart's desire and calls out the name 'Rose'. Beautifully penned, dear Victor. All the Best.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 5:59 PM
such an emotional read, Victor. I can feel the helplessness within your words. Best wishes with the contest, have a blessed evening, Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 1:11 PM
An emotive tale, Victor. Great entry in Constance's challenge.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Struggling with the havoc of wind and the name that churns the name “Rose”
Rose  Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Really great poem Victor and the saying matches it perfectly. gl in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:04 AM
This one induced some feeling for both the speaker and the woman he found. Great story told in poetic form. Thank you for sharing. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go.. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Very vivid, and chilling in more ways than one. No joy in being cold and homeless. Hunger is a terrible pain. Good that you helped.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 4:45 AM
wishing help with the wind and Rose. God bless you with a win. much love and prayers, Gina
Poet Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 3:51 AM
Very well composed poem, Victor. With its metaphor layers and wonderful diction, you perfectly portrayed how whispering wind can intervene in a human's broken heart. Best for a win.
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