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Listen To the Warmth

"it happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too...when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and...listen to the warm." - Rod McKuen I feel it deep in my soul; the warmth of our love. When we met, two lonely hearts, became one ... sad, it was not forever.... Nevermore, will I feel your sweet lips upon mine, nevermore will I feel your sweet embrace. You lie down in the darkness, now my dear, yet I love you still. My tears fall on your tomb, oh can you feel the warmth of my sad heart? In dreams, I call you, come my love, I want to hold you to my heart tonight and feel you caress my raven hair. Whisper how much you love me, I need to hear your voice, that deep melodic warmth till dawn, then fly away love. I need to travel that long winding road to your tomb, I want to be with you although you are gone, passion is warm still. This is a love eternal, oh wait for me, darling, one day we will be united at those heavenly gates, wait for me. I still recall that day we first met ...I was...dizzy Your smile and voice held me hostage... I lay my cheek upon your tomb and my soul is bleeding from my forever scar. I asked you, please don't go, stay home with me, we could have stayed sweetly tangled in the sheets. You laughed at me and walked out into a snowstorm, In my dream, I heard the crash and metal crumbling, and I knew. Come darling, the moon is high in the sky tonight and I need to see your face and feel your embrace. The warmth of your breath, and I want your sweet kiss. I need to be with you until the dawn calls you back into the darkness ... my dear. ...forever is the warmth of our love~ _______________________________ April 19, 2016 Poetry/Prose/Listen to the Warmth Copyright Protected, ID 16-780-484-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Listen to the Warmth, sponsor, Laura Loo First Place
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May 13, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
Williams Gault Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:52 AM
The depth of the love struck me as much as the gravity of the loss. Congratulations on your win!
Lane Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Your poetry comes from such deep hurt and sorrowful loss. It's sad yet beautiful, but I know your strength and I admire you for it. hugs for your win.
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Constancee as usual I am spell bound with your words! Nevertheless, congrats on your oustandingu placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
Mcclain Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Hi Broken Wing, Congrats on yet another impressive win with this hauntingly beautiful tale of eternal love. Well skillfully written and deeply absorbing. Cheers, Brian
Parker Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 6:01 PM
congratulations on your win, very emotional, cuts deep with pictures it reveals
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:03 PM
I can't say I'm surprised to see you at the top in this contest. Your writing is always so emotionally powerful. Congrats on the contest; this is beautifully written. You are a very talented writer. -G
Devnath  Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:00 PM
A great congrats on your win with this beautiful poem filled passion my lovely friend my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Your loss in life makes you put your soul into your write that's why your a great writer O:-) Congratulations on your win!!!
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:49 AM
oh Broken Wings..what can I say? This is beautiful as always... thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Raina Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Eternal love flows in your write...emotional and heart breaking.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 6:04 PM
MR, aaah yes heartbreaking is a good description of this forever and eternal love ~
Ashe Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 8:53 PM
"This is a love eternal"....this write is all about eternal love! Nice Broken Wings!
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:36 PM
walter thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment
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