Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too, when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen 


I reflect on them often, those years. Watching gilded sunsets from the shade of old trees we’d planted in the yard. I try to reclaim the contentment of our lazy romance. There was no wine; no little black dresses. It was certainly not a diamond, ruby, and emerald affair. But was it any less valuable? I bask still in the glow of the fires we’d share during cold winters, and the way the dogs would curl up and sleep on our feet as we’d read together. Your side of the bed has grown so very cold in your absence. Sometimes, as I dream, I can feel you, your warmth… and hear you snoring. Ok, so you weren’t sleeping beauty…but I needed no fairy tales. That was our life, wasn’t it? Simple and honest, and perfect for what it was because we were together… were. Now here I sit, chilly, with just my reflections, and your empty chair. I dwell on yesterday and my heart listens for the warm. Perhaps it will be tonight, under the gilded sunset of my own life, that as the sun sets and the night grows cold we shall sit together by the fire, with the dogs asleep at our feet, and be together once more, forever warm.
5/5/16 For Contest: Listen to the Warm Hosted by: Laura Loo

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Date: 5/19/2016 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. A 7 sure. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/15/2016 6:23:00 PM
I can picture it...warm.
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Date: 5/14/2016 12:39:00 AM
Very very beautiful poem...Romantic..Nostalgic...Sad, and yes- Extremely beautiful.>> Charma
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:49:00 AM
The Grahamburglar, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on you win. Beautifully done.... Fran
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Date: 5/12/2016 7:48:00 PM
wowoowow. Best poem I have read tonight, and I've been here over half an hour now. Congrats on this excellent piece. I hope it got the high marks it deserved to my FAVES
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Date: 5/12/2016 7:46:00 PM
I'm glad you appreciated my nounification of adjectives. haha. Just trying to be different for that weird quote we had to work with. Let me read YOUR poem now!!
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:18:00 AM
This felt like a longing for the warm embrace of home, for that's what loved ones become. Quite heartfelt...congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2016 10:57:00 PM
G, this touched my heart so sadly beautiful, congrats on your win
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Date: 5/11/2016 9:38:00 PM
When I first read this one I knew it would be a top choice. I love it.
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Date: 5/11/2016 2:33:00 PM
Somehow this contest inspired similar themes for both of us, while "listening to the warm". Of love lost, and lonely nights. However, as usual, I cannot come close to your talent for making the scene come alive, as if watching a film. Great work as always!! :) ps...and thanks so much for your approval.. I know you try to be honest, so your words are a compliment!
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Date: 5/11/2016 2:30:00 PM
So very beautifully written, Graham...I felt your love and warmth and then the sad warmth which tugged at my heart...but, also feel your hope in the beyond. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/11/2016 7:51:00 AM
Perfect for the contest... thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 5/9/2016 8:15:00 PM
B E A U T I F U L
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Date: 5/8/2016 4:50:00 AM
A beautiful write. i can hear 'the warm' happening here. The scenario, the images, kindles something within the soul. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 5/8/2016 12:07:00 AM
I cant even begin to say a comment to do this justice. Great write!
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Date: 5/6/2016 3:00:00 PM
Keep 'em coming! :)
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The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/7/2016 6:56:00 PM
If anything they'll be coming to a halt here for the next few days. =/ Let finals begin.
Date: 5/6/2016 2:08:00 PM
You chose the perfect title for this poem as reading it left me feeling warm, warming my heart. It was real and wonderfully written! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/6/2016 2:14:00 PM
Hey Connie, thanks for stopping by, and for the kind remarks. -G
Date: 5/6/2016 11:00:00 AM
I read some of your good poems of meditation on love,life , need of tenderness, growing pains etc, all proving a real talent with heart and exceptional open to ethics. It is a rewarding experience to enter the garden of your thoughts. Best regards and admiration.
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Date: 5/6/2016 2:08:00 PM
I am glad you enjoy my writing, and thank you for the kind encouragement. -G
Date: 5/5/2016 6:55:00 PM
Romantic, unmaterialistic and so lovely. Well done. You brought me there.
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Date: 5/6/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks, Kelli. I appreciate your comments. =) -G
Date: 5/5/2016 6:28:00 PM
Such a wonderful write great flow of words, the love of your life beside you and then gone.
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:39:00 PM
...and then gone, temporarily. ;)
Date: 5/5/2016 5:38:00 PM
These are very beautiful sentiments of lost love, Graham. The touch of soft humor makes it all the more real. I truly enjoyed reading this one.
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The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/5/2016 6:41:00 PM
It's life right? Not always rainbows and butterflies. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the encouraging comment. -G
Date: 5/5/2016 5:37:00 PM
Loved the "comfort zone". Sometimes the best romance is found in life's shared simplicity!
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:42:00 PM
I agree completely. Romance is certainly not exclusive to those who can afford the world. Thanks for the comment. -G
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