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Lissome - First Place Contest Winner

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In a world where chaos roams, The human howl shook the domes. Lissome and slender, with grace to spare, A vision of beauty beyond compare Her demesnes are poetry, dancing on air, With each step she bears, it is a mesmerizing affair. Her body, so lithe and so effortlessly appease As if she's been kissed by the breeze. Her limbs flow such a river's stream, In each motion, a graceful dream Her presence, a beacon that draws the eye, In a world of chaos, she makes chaos shy. She glides amid the frenzy, her grace untamed. A creature so rare, no one can be blamed, For falling under her enchanting spell, In her presence, all troubles dwell. She carries a strength that is not easily seen. A resilience that keeps her serene. Through the chaos, she remains steadfast. A symbol of hope that will forever last.  In her presence, chaos never subsides. Replacing fear with the hope that resides  A beacon of light, a reminder of what could be, In a world where chaos roams free. Her beauty is not just skin deep. But as a reflection of her soul, she keeps Within her lissome form, Holds a soul that is ever-welcoming and warm.
1st place contest winner

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Date: 7/21/2023 9:28:00 AM
Sotto, wonderful poem congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words and I like your image, and music !
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Date: 7/20/2023 2:02:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 7/20/2023 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I love your line, "In a world where chaos roams," Very True.... Have a wonderful day....................
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Date: 7/17/2023 3:11:00 PM
Wow, the vision you create of radiant beauty is breathtaking and seeing in one's mind eye, her lissome form so supple and free, brings her to life. You created a pinnacle of lustrous beauty my friend. Well done.
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Date: 7/17/2023 2:16:00 PM
- "In a world where chaos roams" ... we really need this beauty, Las ... I enjoy every line :) - hugs
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