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Liquid Mind

My mind is not a library of ancient, stodgy old books. It looks like a rushing rainbow mercury river that finds life's crannies and brooks. It has eclectic power and mass, and goes Wherever it well pleases, at long last! It's an unstoppable river, that has no time to please any nor to stand still. Just blesses the rich land as it Laughingly slides down the hills. It cannot be contained nor put in a jar. My liquid mind is too magical by far! 5/21/2019 3:30pm PST

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2019 1:00:00 PM

Go for it girl - no restraints - just a never ending ocean where tides come and go. Magic cannot be contained in a jar not should it ever be, but rather revealed, and mysteries forever to be told! Hugs, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 1:08:00 PM

Agree with you 100 per cent plus ! Panagiota xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/22/2019 9:45:00 AM

magical write Panagiota! love this line: "Laughingly slides down the hills. It cannot be contained nor put in a jar."

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 10:59:00 AM

PS. The line is literally true! The poem even amazes me in its accuracy about me. I'd love to know where these lines come from ....At times, they magicaally appear on paper! Thanks for expressing yourself. Panagiota

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/22/2019 7:35:00 AM

Stems a muse, bears potential for more, yet, it's brevity begs a valuable score Panagiota, Aloha wk

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 10:15:00 AM

William, thank you!. Keep up your fabulous work! Panagiota

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/21/2019 8:18:00 PM

Wondrous turns of phrases, Panagiota; imaginative, inspiring theme! Metaphorical marvel! Bravo! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 1:13:00 AM

I accept your Bravo, humbly.thank you. Panagiota

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2019 7:08:00 PM

to flex your wings and explore the world of imagination is life's mantra... very finely expressed, panagiota... huggs

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 12:57:00 AM

How well you said this nene...gorgeous and so uplifting! Panagiota...Huggs to you from California

David Mchattie

Date: 5/21/2019 6:42:00 PM

Well said. As long as we can see all the possibilities, life has no restraints. Wonderful poem my friend.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/22/2019 12:52:00 AM

Greetings David! Possibities yes! Onward! So grateful, you liked this. Panagiota