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Intent on gleaning secrets, I observed my own reflection (instead of marine life) in this tide pool--its surface intoning, impulsing, insisting on its own rhythm, insinuating my face between its depth and my inquisitive mind. In this instant, I realized I must look beyond surfaces, incessant distractions. I plunged my bare face into the pool, invasive in my effort to discover its immense treasure, its unique interpretations--its soul.

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Date: 5/18/2024 6:13:00 PM
I like, "In this instant, I realized I must look/beyond surfaces, incessant distractions."
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/20/2024 12:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. I'm glad you liked the poem.

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