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Lips

Twin sets of crimson lips Smooth as silk and satin To the caress and kiss. Their opening moistness, It does well slake my thirst And also inflames me With a potent desire To fill you with my being. Before these twin shrines, Silver and gleaming, I kneel and adore To immerse myself In their sweet ichor, Washing cares away In their limpid pools Where I long to stay. Bright red and pink the hues Of those inviting lips Wherein myself I lose To join with you as one, Entwined to fully fuse Heartbeats in unison.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2009 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:47:00 PM
Love the last stanza of this excellent write, Denis. Congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured this week at the Soup!!
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Date: 9/17/2009 1:41:00 PM
I have a feeling you know how good this is! So sensual and awesome and just plain good! Such a lovely way to look at a woman you're in love with. Congratulations on the feature.
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Date: 9/17/2009 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations friend, on having your poem featured this week. Please keep writing. Great you! Adeleke
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Date: 9/15/2009 8:18:00 PM
Denis - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:33:00 AM
Denis, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:40:00 PM
steamy, congrats on being a featured artist!!
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Denis. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:55:00 AM
Denis, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:01:00 PM
WOW ... very sensual here, Denis and now your writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest and keep up the great imagery !!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Denis. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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