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Lingering Thoughts

~ The October sky is silent this night as my warmest thoughts linger beneath its pastel canopy of leaves gently falling, creating a tapestry on the chilly ground ~ It is then that I see a crescent moon smiling happily above the autumn horizon and its expression tells me it must be thinking about the same thing I am… you ~

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2019 3:30:00 PM

Hi Chris - this is such a mellow write - truly romantic, describing your lingering thoughts so vividly- your imagery is amazing - well penned. Hugs, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 4:20:00 PM

I am happy you liked this one. Thank you again for your visits today. Your kindness is a wonderful gift.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/11/2019 11:08:00 AM

Crescent moon smiling, that's so creative I never thought about it that way, you do have a way of turning mundane events into a romantic write. That's why so many of us cherish your writing(and you of course)

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 11:14:00 AM

Thanks again John. You are always so nice to me. I appreciate you

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2019 3:52:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous chris, i wish i could write like this:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Jan. You do write beautifully, I am a big fan.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/11/2019 1:00:00 AM

Another joy to read... a inspiration... God bless you always, Love, Gina

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you so very much Gina for all of the kindness you show me

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/10/2019 9:54:00 PM

Beautiful as always!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you so very much Brenda. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2019 8:05:00 PM

a wow poem.. YOu always deliver, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I am happy you enjoyed this one so much. I appreciate your kind words.

Hello There

Date: 10/10/2019 6:43:00 PM

Aw, keep it up, my friend ~ and you will have each and everyone one of us swooning over your words ;) So beautiful, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Swooning is always welcome on my page. : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/10/2019 6:08:00 PM

there's something romantic about a moon but a crescent moon is just special to me... love this gorgeous poem....beautiful penning my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:55:00 AM

The moon is very magical to me, my thoughts always go to romance when I witness it's beautiful glow in the evening sky. And when it smiles, I smile too. Thank you Sandy, I also smile when you stop by. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/10/2019 6:03:00 PM

The crescent moon smiling is very sweet Chris. This poem paints a beautiful picture! :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I am happy you stopped by

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/10/2019 5:41:00 PM

Hello Chris, I sense that you have out done yourself with this poem. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you.

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you so very much Darlene for your kind words