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Lucy loves wearing sheer lingerie. Her husband Luke still buys her saucy lace thongs and corsets which laced up the front. Her once lithe body is now not looking good at ninety! L Pleiades Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman Checked with How Many Syllables 04~13~17

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 2:29:00 PM

Nicely done Jan! congratulations! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:37:00 PM

Hahahah...Nicely written , Jan, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2017 9:41:00 PM

So cute, Jan, and that picture is hilarious! Just the image of a ninety year old woman wearing thongs and corsets is hilarious. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/18/2017 3:28:00 PM

Haha, its amusing Jan!Congrats!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/18/2017 7:24:00 AM

Coming back with congrats. Happy to see you on the winners list.

Roy Pett

Date: 4/18/2017 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, brilliant as usual.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 5:41:00 AM

Back for congrats!

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2017 3:42:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/15/2017 6:33:00 PM

You really have said it all amazingly Jan:) That picture is quite something. Clever, clever writing:) lynnxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Lynn I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2017 5:11:00 PM

hahaha. Ya THINK???

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 5:14:00 PM

errr I think its called poetic licence lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 4:15:00 AM

Jan is a mensch. It' OK not to have religious convictions. My acid test is biblical: "If u stay married to your spouse, and don't cheat on that spouse ... love your kids or those of others ... God/Jesus can work with that." Love of humanity trumps unforgiveness & political insanity, imho. shalom, shalom

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 4:35:00 AM

aww thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 2:42:00 AM

I avided clicking on this until my fast fro Good Friday was over. That man in the cartoon is so precious: sweet angel of death nonsense. At least he could have shaken his stick at it ... walking stick that is. Shalom/Peace/ Purity ... etc (LOL)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 2:48:00 AM

Ha Ha Ha I see you have a very naughty sense of humour ... as you can probably tell I have no religious conviction or any other convictions for that matter but i could get locked up for poop poetry I gues lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2017 5:12:00 PM

Haha..Nice one Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2017 3:08:00 PM

- :))) ... I've saved this picture for a long time ... I have not found something fun to write :))) ... but, you did it !!! - Love it, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:33:00 PM

I wrote the poem then found the pic I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White

Date: 4/13/2017 11:40:00 PM

Ahhhh hahahaha, what the man is thinking is hilarioius! Good luck Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:09:00 AM

I wrote the poem then found the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2017 11:08:00 PM

Hilarious Jan, I couldn't see the picture, I can only see the frame in the upper left hand corner!!! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:08:00 AM

You aren't missing anything with the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/13/2017 8:33:00 PM

LOL. I could have done without the picture - some things are impossible to "unsee" :) Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:07:00 AM

I hope the pic doesn't give you nightmares lol I wanted to have a twist on my choice of word and the ending took a while to form:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/13/2017 7:50:00 PM

lol.. lace at ninety..good one, jan..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 7:55:00 PM

I wanted a twist at the end Nette I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2017 6:19:00 PM

Lucy and Luke have a thong going on. It's so right it's wrong...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 6:20:00 PM

ha ha ha I agree Kim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 4/13/2017 5:50:00 PM

Ha...at least he still finds her sexy. :) Nice one Jan. Good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 5:52:00 PM

I saw your comment to Darren so I hope this poem made you smile Chris - the first 5 lines were simple but I wanted a twist at the end lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/13/2017 5:48:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. This looks like a strong contender.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Robert:-) Its so good to see you back on soup you were always so supportive of me when I was a new member:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/13/2017 5:45:00 PM

Hahaha...lol. I do believe at ninety..I might be running around like Eve..because I wont have the strength to lift up a thong..nor a diaper...Lol .What a horrible site I will be :)..But I wonder who will care..by then..Ha.Love your humour dear.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 5:53:00 PM

I wanted to try and get a twist at the end of the poem:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour!:-) hugs Jan xx