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Lingerie

Lucy loves wearing sheer
lingerie. Her husband 
Luke still buys her saucy
lace thongs and corsets which
laced up the front. Her once
lithe body is now not
looking good at ninety!



L Pleiades Contest
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Mark Martin Date: 4/27/2017 2:29:00 PM Nicely done Jan! congratulations! :-) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/22/2017 7:37:00 PM Hahahah...Nicely written , Jan, congratulations on your win. ~* Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/19/2017 9:41:00 PM So cute, Jan, and that picture is hilarious! Just the image of a ninety year old woman wearing thongs and corsets is hilarious. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply

Sara Chansarkar Date: 4/18/2017 3:28:00 PM Haha, its amusing Jan!Congrats! Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/18/2017 7:24:00 AM Coming back with congrats. Happy to see you on the winners list. Login to Reply

Roy Pett Date: 4/18/2017 5:52:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, brilliant as usual. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/18/2017 5:41:00 AM Back for congrats! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/18/2017 3:42:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2017 1:39:00 AM - Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 4/15/2017 6:33:00 PM You really have said it all amazingly Jan:) That picture is quite something. Clever, clever writing:) lynnxxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2017 6:36:00 PM Thanks Lynn I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2017 5:11:00 PM hahaha. Ya THINK??? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2017 5:14:00 PM errr I think its called poetic licence lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo Date: 4/15/2017 4:15:00 AM Jan is a mensch. It' OK not to have religious convictions. My acid test is biblical: "If u stay married to your spouse, and don't cheat on that spouse ... love your kids or those of others ... God/Jesus can work with that." Love of humanity trumps unforgiveness & political insanity, imho. shalom, shalom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2017 4:35:00 AM aww thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo Date: 4/15/2017 2:42:00 AM I avided clicking on this until my fast fro Good Friday was over. That man in the cartoon is so precious: sweet angel of death nonsense. At least he could have shaken his stick at it ... walking stick that is. Shalom/Peace/ Purity ... etc (LOL) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2017 2:48:00 AM Ha Ha Ha I see you have a very naughty sense of humour ... as you can probably tell I have no religious conviction or any other convictions for that matter but i could get locked up for poop poetry I gues lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May Date: 4/14/2017 5:12:00 PM Haha..Nice one Jan.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2017 5:14:00 PM Thanks Joseph:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2017 3:08:00 PM - :))) ... I've saved this picture for a long time ... I have not found something fun to write :))) ... but, you did it !!! - Love it, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2017 3:33:00 PM I wrote the poem then found the pic I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White Date: 4/13/2017 11:40:00 PM Ahhhh hahahaha, what the man is thinking is hilarioius! Good luck Jan :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2017 3:09:00 AM I wrote the poem then found the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/13/2017 11:08:00 PM Hilarious Jan, I couldn't see the picture, I can only see the frame in the upper left hand corner!!! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2017 3:08:00 AM You aren't missing anything with the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/13/2017 8:33:00 PM LOL. I could have done without the picture - some things are impossible to "unsee" :) Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2017 3:07:00 AM I hope the pic doesn't give you nightmares lol I wanted to have a twist on my choice of word and the ending took a while to form:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/13/2017 7:50:00 PM lol.. lace at ninety..good one, jan..huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/13/2017 7:55:00 PM I wanted a twist at the end Nette I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2017 6:19:00 PM Lucy and Luke have a thong going on. It's so right it's wrong...lol Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/13/2017 6:20:00 PM ha ha ha I agree Kim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 4/13/2017 5:50:00 PM Ha...at least he still finds her sexy. :) Nice one Jan. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/13/2017 5:52:00 PM I saw your comment to Darren so I hope this poem made you smile Chris - the first 5 lines were simple but I wanted a twist at the end lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit Date: 4/13/2017 5:48:00 PM Good luck in the contest. This looks like a strong contender. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/13/2017 5:52:00 PM Thanks Robert:-) Its so good to see you back on soup you were always so supportive of me when I was a new member:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2017 5:45:00 PM Hahaha...lol. I do believe at ninety..I might be running around like Eve..because I wont have the strength to lift up a thong..nor a diaper...Lol .What a horrible site I will be :)..But I wonder who will care..by then..Ha.Love your humour dear. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/13/2017 5:53:00 PM I wanted to try and get a twist at the end of the poem:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour!:-) hugs Jan xx