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Lingerie

Lucy loves wearing sheer
lingerie. Her husband 
Luke still buys her saucy
lace thongs and corsets which
laced up the front. Her once
lithe body is now not
looking good at ninety!



L Pleiades Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman

Checked with How Many Syllables

04~13~17

bodychangeclotheshumoroussexyverse

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Mark Martin

April 27, 2017 at 2:29 PM

Nicely done Jan! congratulations! :-)

Eve Roper

April 22, 2017 at 7:37 PM

Hahahah...Nicely written , Jan, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kim Merryman

April 19, 2017 at 9:41 PM

So cute, Jan, and that picture is hilarious! Just the image of a ninety year old woman wearing thongs and corsets is hilarious. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Sara Chansarkar

April 18, 2017 at 3:28 PM

Haha, its amusing Jan!Congrats!

Agnes Krampe

April 18, 2017 at 7:24 AM

Coming back with congrats. Happy to see you on the winners list.

Roy Pett

April 18, 2017 at 5:52 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, brilliant as usual.

Kim Rodrigues

April 18, 2017 at 5:41 AM

Back for congrats!

Joseph May

April 18, 2017 at 3:42 AM

Dropping back with my congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 18, 2017 at 1:39 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

April 15, 2017 at 6:33 PM

You really have said it all amazingly Jan:) That picture is quite something. Clever, clever writing:) lynnxxx

Jan Allison

April 15, 2017 at 6:36 PM

Thanks Lynn I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2017 at 5:11 PM

hahaha. Ya THINK???

Jan Allison

April 15, 2017 at 5:14 PM

errr I think its called poetic licence lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

April 15, 2017 at 4:15 AM

Jan is a mensch. It' OK not to have religious convictions. My acid test is biblical: "If u stay married to your spouse, and don't cheat on that spouse ... love your kids or those of others ... God/Jesus can work with that." Love of humanity trumps unforgiveness & political insanity, imho. shalom, shalom

Jan Allison

April 15, 2017 at 4:35 AM

aww thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

April 15, 2017 at 2:42 AM

I avided clicking on this until my fast fro Good Friday was over. That man in the cartoon is so precious: sweet angel of death nonsense. At least he could have shaken his stick at it ... walking stick that is. Shalom/Peace/ Purity ... etc (LOL)

Jan Allison

April 15, 2017 at 2:48 AM

Ha Ha Ha I see you have a very naughty sense of humour ... as you can probably tell I have no religious conviction or any other convictions for that matter but i could get locked up for poop poetry I gues lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

April 14, 2017 at 5:12 PM

Haha..Nice one Jan..

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 5:14 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 14, 2017 at 3:08 PM

- :))) ... I've saved this picture for a long time ... I have not found something fun to write :))) ... but, you did it !!! - Love it, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 3:33 PM

I wrote the poem then found the pic I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White

April 13, 2017 at 11:40 PM

Ahhhh hahahaha, what the man is thinking is hilarioius! Good luck Jan :)

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 3:09 AM

I wrote the poem then found the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

April 13, 2017 at 11:08 PM

Hilarious Jan, I couldn't see the picture, I can only see the frame in the upper left hand corner!!! :)

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 3:08 AM

You aren't missing anything with the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

April 13, 2017 at 8:33 PM

LOL. I could have done without the picture - some things are impossible to "unsee" :) Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 3:07 AM

I hope the pic doesn't give you nightmares lol I wanted to have a twist on my choice of word and the ending took a while to form:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

April 13, 2017 at 7:50 PM

lol.. lace at ninety..good one, jan..huggs

Jan Allison

April 13, 2017 at 7:55 PM

I wanted a twist at the end Nette I hope Kim has a good sense of humour:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

April 13, 2017 at 6:19 PM

Lucy and Luke have a thong going on. It's so right it's wrong...lol

Jan Allison

April 13, 2017 at 6:20 PM

ha ha ha I agree Kim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

April 13, 2017 at 5:50 PM

Ha...at least he still finds her sexy. :) Nice one Jan. Good luck in the contest

Jan Allison

April 13, 2017 at 5:52 PM

I saw your comment to Darren so I hope this poem made you smile Chris - the first 5 lines were simple but I wanted a twist at the end lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit

April 13, 2017 at 5:48 PM

Good luck in the contest. This looks like a strong contender.

Jan Allison

April 13, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Thanks Robert:-) Its so good to see you back on soup you were always so supportive of me when I was a new member:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

April 13, 2017 at 5:45 PM

Hahaha...lol. I do believe at ninety..I might be running around like Eve..because I wont have the strength to lift up a thong..nor a diaper...Lol .What a horrible site I will be :)..But I wonder who will care..by then..Ha.Love your humour dear.

Jan Allison

April 13, 2017 at 5:53 PM

I wanted to try and get a twist at the end of the poem:-) I hope Kim has a good sense of humour!:-) hugs Jan xx

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