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Lines

She spoke his line and he spoke her line. Together combine, they combed a line. Curls Curls Curls became the nice new name. No more lines and no one to blame. He in She.. forever... in love's lined lane.

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:23:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/28/2017 10:40:00 AM
This is an intriguing poem, it has so much depth and leaves one with questions, wonderful poetry. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:57:00 AM
Lovely ... a ring of good art ...
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:47:00 AM
Cute love poem .. ! I'm sure your lady must be overwhelmed ??
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