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Line at the Loo

There was a line at the loo
poor pups didn't know what to do
	each clapped his four paws
	with rousing applause
when Frenchy finished his poo!
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Clarke Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:52 AM
I really like this one. Nice one Linda. Congratulations :-)
Fowler Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Thanks WJ. :)
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Very funny, congratulations
Fowler Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Terry. I am glad you found some humor in it. :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 3:52 PM
Back with congrats. Love this
Fowler Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Andrea. :)
Anaya Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:21 PM
Back once more with....Congratulations on your top win bff!
Fowler Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thanks dear bff. I appreciate you! :)
Proxenos Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:27 AM
a delightful poem and an awesome pic combined equal a very deserved P0TW, Congratulation my friend such patient, cute doggies, could give some humans lessons! Hugs Blessings, Jennifer
Fowler Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Hugs and blessings dear Jennifer! Happy to see you! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:09 AM
LOL, Linda! Clapped their 4 paws! Paws now for applause. To make such a ta-doo-doo! Congrats on last week’s honor! Sorry I’m so late!
Fowler Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 10:50 AM
NP Kim. I'm glad you liked this one. Never too late for kind words. ;) Many thanks for you visit and congrats! :)
Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Animals are so clever..I sing to a spaniel to Go to toilet..Like this aga do do do..Push pinapple grind coff'ee..To the left to the right Chase a squirell through the trees, find the Right kind of grass, do a great big poo; for me.! Enjoyed the write it got me smiling Linda-Alice! I have the captcha NDE i must admit i laughed Maybe Iv'e crossed over.??
Fowler Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 9:28 AM
LOL Joe...NDE indeed. haha. So glad to see you smiling and NOT crossing over just yet! Thanks for the visit and giggles. :)
Bowring Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Dear Linda, many congratulations for the honour of POTW with this so amusing, delightful limerick. It’s sooo cute! I’m still laughing now. Loved it my lovely. Well done! :) :):)
Fowler Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thank you Christina! Glad you got a laugh dear friend. :)
M  Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Hehe….You are back LO and with POTW!!!! Well done and Congratulations my friend….a very cute poem! Debx
Fowler Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 6:59 AM
I'm baaaack! Amazing, isn't it? A fun little limerick POTW. LOL I'm loving it. Thanks sweet Deb! xoxo :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Sometimes my own mutt doesn’know whether to squat or cock his leg, so I totally get the line (didn’t know what to do), you’ve done a great job with the prompt photo Linda, so a round of applause from me to you for your fun and lighthearted POTW, congratulations cheers David
Fowler Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 6:58 AM
LOL David. Many thanks for your congrats! :)
Jones Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:02 AM
Entertaining and lighthearted limerick! Congratulations on potw!
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Hi Karen! Thank you! :)
Rodgers Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 6:27 PM
Dear Linda, Your witty and whimsical poem captures a moment of everyday chaos with delightful humor. It's the joy found in the simplest moments and the shared experiences that connect us all, even in unexpected places like the loo queue. Congratulations on being awarded Poet of the Week; your ability to find lightness in life's quirks is truly commendable. Keep spreading laughter and warmth through your words! Blessings, Daniel
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Daniel. I am gladdened by your comments. Laughter is everything to me. I am happy you found some laughter here. :)
Nicole Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 4:43 PM
While waiting for Frenchy to be through, what's a pup to do ? :) I'm smiling at you, Linda. This is cute, clever and creative. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Many thanks dear Brandy. Glad you got a smile.:)
Anaya Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Back with congratulations on your POTW, Alice! Clapping for you bff! Cat lovers who love doggy's too")
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Hey Anaya! Love all creatures. ;) Thanks for the congrats bff! :)
Baker Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Cute Limerick, Linda. Congratulations on your POTW, my friend! Enjoy your special week of recognition! Bill
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Bill! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTW win. I enjoyed reading your very cute "Line at the Loo" write again. Have A Wonderful/Blessed Weekend Writing Away With Your Win.........
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Paula. :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Linda, a cute one, congratulations on POTW.
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Tania. :)
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 3:30 AM
WOOOHOOOOOO Many congrats on POTW Linda, so good to see humourous limericks getting awarded, Jack Horne got POTD yesterday which made his day:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Who'd have thunk it, eh? Yes, I read Jack's limerick yesterday and got a giggle Jan. Many thanks to you. :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Lol, good one Iinda, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Fowler Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Hello dear Tom. Thank you. All well here, thx :)
Edmonds  Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:26 AM
An hilarious Limerick Linda, love it… Beryl
Fowler Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Beryl. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Gasun Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 1:29 AM
Great one! ha ha ha:))) I love this limerick so much. I'm so happy you wrote a poem on one of my favorite photos of clever dogs my dearest poet friend. Faving it and wanting to print the photo (to include in my clever dogs photo collections) with your superb limerick. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs..
Fowler Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Hi Len. Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this. The picture is from the Picture Prompt contest sponsored by Margarita Lillico. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/picture_prompt_21998 So good to see you! :)
Brotherton Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:16 PM
A brilliant limerick. Creative and most humorous.
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 6:26 PM
You are too kind my friend. Thank you Jerry! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 11:51 AM
These poo poems are funny. I also read Jan’s. Well done.
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Thanks Richard. I read Jan's as well. She never disappoints! :)
Delaney Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:07 AM
So funny, Linda…..Thanks for the chuckle this morning. SuZ
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Glad to oblige SuZ. A chuckle to start the day - always welcome. :)
Rolland Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 4:12 AM
such humor is a masterpiece, l always wonder who take this photo, and how, thanks for the poem yann
Fowler Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Good to see you Yann. I, as well, wonder. Glad you saw the humor. :)
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