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Limerick In Paradise

If I were a fly on their wall. And heard about Adam’s big fall. I’d say “God please try me. I’ll do better than he If I weren’t so unfairly small”. For Michael's Fly on the Wall limerick contest won # 4

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Date: 2/22/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write.
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Date: 2/5/2011 8:36:00 AM
Hi Joyce - Congratulations on your WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:59:00 AM
perfect meter!!! Tadadaaaaaaahhh! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:34:00 PM
good one Joyce. they may be small but sure can cause big havock. Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:33:00 PM
I'm so delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrats, Joyce. Well deserved win. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:52:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your well deserved win in my first solo contest...luv Michael
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:30:00 PM
Big congrats Joyce on your win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:59:00 AM
GREAT ENTRY! Dr. Ram, Lainie
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:05:00 PM
funny write, you are showing out to day!!
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:56:00 PM
Such a cute take on the contest, Joyce. Who knows why Adam was the chosen one. It could have been any of God's creatures, even a fly. Still laughing at this one! You'll do great in Michael's contest with this entry and I noticed your contest is filling up quite fast. Way to go, girlfriend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:28:00 PM
This is just adorable, Joyce!!
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