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Lily and Fluffy


Why did Fluffy die, said little Lily,
Well I said, you know that our Fluffy;
Has been sick, her body was not working,
And the doctor said that she was suffering.

But where is she gone, shouted Lily,
Well I said, you know that our Fluffy;
Was a good cat so I bet she is in heaven,
And she has sweet lovely wings that glisten.

Once she ate my cookie, said Lily,
Well I said, she was sneaky that Fluffy;
I remember one time she drank my tea,
Remember the time she got stuck in a tree.

Lets make a scrapbook, shouted Lily,
Well I said, yes and we can call it Fluffy;
We can paste her pictures and write stories,
I have a real nice picture of her and my daisies.

God please kiss my cat, prayed Lily,
Well I said, I am sure God loves Fluffy;
We loved her so much from the very start,
Mommy, I think our Fluffy is living in my heart.

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September 16, 2015

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/22/2015 2:53:00 PM
Children are so hard to make understand a lot of things when they are young as you know. My Robert was 5 years old when his grandpa passed he is 32 now and his thoughts are always with his loving grandpa. Grandpa taught him how to ride a 4 wheeler, shoot a gun and a shotgun, be at his baseball games plus so many other things. Grief is harder in others. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/17/2015 8:52:00 AM
through the eyes of a child....innocence with no denial....Love and compassion, nothing more....a big ole fluffy heart is all that's in store....;)
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Date: 9/17/2015 7:17:00 AM
Very touching Broken Wings. Very sweet. Enjoyed reading! Good luck with the contest.
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