Lilith

beauty and darkness intoxication from the outset salivation dilation of pupils you sweat for a taste of salination purification no matter what I say eye contact is neurotransmission to bypass, most... everything greater good v inconsequential collateral damage it's a dream job someone has to do it job satisfaction.

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David Kavanagh

Date: 5/24/2024 4:12:00 PM

It’s all in the heat of the moment Dilly isn’t it, some really well thought out lines here, or maybe not thought out at all, yeah I think that’s the point, bypass everything, collateral damage falls wayside, such is Lilith by design, man’s design, my interpretation your poem, excellent piece, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/24/2024 10:06:00 PM

I suppose that's why it's a dangerous subject to debate. Is the debate about the independence of women and the need for man to try and control that due to feelings of powerlessness? Haha maybe! Thanks for your comment as always :)