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Somehow I always know when Spring will come By the fragrance of lilacs in the sun ; Their trembling buds awake beside my fench And bear sweet of blossoms, yet I must wait Until the daylight comes around to warm Each perfumed spray. Not one frostbite must harm These eternal florae of bridal white And rosy pink immortal in delight The diamond leaves are unfurling now To hang delicately on April twigs , And pearly mist that glides on wind's showers Till choirs of red jays, robins start to coo One lustrous melody to worship morn A view of forever I'll also see This holy radiance spring's lilac tree . 3/2/2017 Form-I (Immortal Theme) Contest of Broken Wing

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Date: 3/21/2017 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette: An ode to beautiful lilacs now a favorite of mine. SuZ
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:53:00 AM
Fragrance and awakening of most lovely verse! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, well done...
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:57:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 3/9/2017 7:44:00 PM
This was lovely. Lilacs are my favorites!
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Date: 3/4/2017 11:32:00 AM
I applaud your lovely write! CayCay
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Date: 3/3/2017 7:34:00 PM
Beauty of flowers, winter snow, morn's cool breeze, clear flowing wooded streams-all and more in a lady's eyes, voice , soul and heart. Exceptional poetry my good friend. A fav.
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Date: 3/3/2017 2:37:00 AM
This is beautiful nette! The lilac bush that grew at the home I used to have, were lavender in colour. :) and our jays on the east coast are blue. How wonderful to hear of different varieties! Well done. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 3/2/2017 10:51:00 PM
A very well orchestrated piece a winners already ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/2/2017 9:57:00 PM
This brighten my night -- color, sound, and fragrance . . . a delight to my heart!
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:31:00 PM
Beautifully done Onclaud, be sweet and compete. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:09:00 PM
Your poem competes with the beauty of nature dear, nette! Fantastic painting! A huge seven!
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:56:00 PM
I agree. Good Nothing realizes spring like a lilac tree. Good one. Love, daver
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:22:00 PM
Eternity in a flower; how your lyrical words enthrall!
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:15:00 PM
This was absolutely beautiful Nette. One thing that I always miss about where I used to live are the Lilacs. I loved the scent and they did broadcast the coming of spring. What I have now close is the Mountain Laurel. They bloom purple and their aroma is sweet grape. They too, down here, identify the coming of spring.
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:55:00 AM
- Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - Happy day, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/2/2017 1:30:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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