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 Somehow   I always know when Spring will come 
By the fragrance of lilacs in the sun ;
Their trembling buds awake beside my fench 
And  bear sweet of  blossoms, yet I must wait 
Until the daylight comes around to warm 
Each perfumed spray. Not one frostbite must harm 
These eternal florae     of bridal white 
And rosy pink immortal in  delight 

The diamond leaves  are unfurling now 
To  hang delicately  on April twigs ,
And pearly mist that glides on wind's showers 
Till choirs of red  jays, robins start to coo 
One lustrous melody to worship morn 
A view of  forever    I'll also see 
This holy radiance  spring's lilac tree .

Form-I  (Immortal Theme)
Contest of Broken Wing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 3/21/2017 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette: An ode to beautiful lilacs now a favorite of mine. SuZ
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:53:00 AM
Fragrance and awakening of most lovely verse! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, well done...
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:57:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 3/9/2017 7:44:00 PM
This was lovely. Lilacs are my favorites!
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Date: 3/4/2017 11:32:00 AM
I applaud your lovely write! CayCay
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Date: 3/3/2017 7:34:00 PM
Beauty of flowers, winter snow, morn's cool breeze, clear flowing wooded streams-all and more in a lady's eyes, voice , soul and heart. Exceptional poetry my good friend. A fav.
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Date: 3/3/2017 2:37:00 AM
This is beautiful nette! The lilac bush that grew at the home I used to have, were lavender in colour. :) and our jays on the east coast are blue. How wonderful to hear of different varieties! Well done. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 3/2/2017 10:51:00 PM
A very well orchestrated piece a winners already ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/2/2017 9:57:00 PM
This brighten my night -- color, sound, and fragrance . . . a delight to my heart!
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:31:00 PM
Beautifully done Onclaud, be sweet and compete. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:09:00 PM
Your poem competes with the beauty of nature dear, nette! Fantastic painting! A huge seven!
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:56:00 PM
I agree. Good Nothing realizes spring like a lilac tree. Good one. Love, daver
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:22:00 PM
Eternity in a flower; how your lyrical words enthrall!
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Date: 3/2/2017 12:15:00 PM
This was absolutely beautiful Nette. One thing that I always miss about where I used to live are the Lilacs. I loved the scent and they did broadcast the coming of spring. What I have now close is the Mountain Laurel. They bloom purple and their aroma is sweet grape. They too, down here, identify the coming of spring.
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:55:00 AM
- Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - Happy day, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/2/2017 1:32:00 AM
I love the beauty and smooth flow of your poetry, Nette. You write in iambic so easily and brilliantly. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 3/2/2017 1:30:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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