Paul Callus Poet Rhyme

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Lilacs and Blue Songs

There were pink blossoms on the trees
that fateful day. The teasing breeze
whispered of love as their eyes met;
they lingered there till the sun set.

The days went by since that first kiss;
their dancing hearts were wrapped in bliss.
The smell of lilacs filled the air.
They had their dreams and love to share.

But cruel fate took him away,
no mercy shown, tragic the day
when she was left in tears, in pain;
she longed for him, but all in vain.

Her aching heart, a pitch black room
wherein no more do flowers bloom.
She lost the will to bathe in hues,
the songs of life have turned to blues.

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[Smell of lilacs, pitch black room, dancing]
29th December, 2015
Contest: Combination of Three Words
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Placed 2nd

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Pashang Salehi March 6, 2016 at 1:16 AM Very Nice Paul... congratulations Paul Callus March 6, 2016 at 6:21 AM Pleased that you like it, Pashang; thank you. All the best. // paul

Red Fiery March 4, 2016 at 8:35 PM This is one of the finest piece of art and we call it poetry...my heart felt so much for this one, Paul...! I love your poems and I am waiting for a new post ....great write by a great poet...faving it now..!!!! Paul Callus March 6, 2016 at 6:20 AM Thank you very much, Red! You are kind and generous:) I am so glad that this poem 'spoke' to you, and the fav is also much appreciated. Wishing you a lovely weekend ~ regards // paul

Timothy Hicks February 18, 2016 at 12:51 AM Beautiful and yet sad. Congratulation on the very high-marked win! I personally enjoyed the "teasing breeze" and "bathe in hues", as the most immersive of your expressions. Paul Callus February 18, 2016 at 6:56 AM Thank you, Timothy. The high ranking surpassed my expectations; I was more concerned with fitting in the 3 proposed phrases than anything else. // paul

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2016 at 11:54 AM Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara Paul Callus January 12, 2016 at 2:49 PM Thank you, Sara; that is why I'm in favour of contests, because they are often a source of inspiration. ~ All the best.....paul

Hansteven Selfa January 12, 2016 at 8:15 AM Congratulations Paul for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans Paul Callus January 12, 2016 at 11:40 AM Thank you, Hansteven. Pleased to have made your acquaintance:) ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2016 at 11:03 PM Hello, Paul, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ Paul Callus January 11, 2016 at 7:04 AM Thank you Linda:) Hope you are keeping well and active. ~ Regards *~* paul

Lindsay Laurie January 8, 2016 at 5:21 PM G'day Paul... full of beauty, emotion, and sadness. Your poem is a definite winner - Lindsay Paul Callus January 11, 2016 at 7:00 AM Thank you Lindsay. Your feedback is very encouraging. ~ Regards // paul

Legendary Legend January 8, 2016 at 1:00 AM oh! very sad for her.......life s unfair sometimes. Paul Callus January 9, 2016 at 10:11 AM Life is often very unfair, LL; that is why we have to make the most of what we have while the going's good. Regards // paul

Sandra Haight January 4, 2016 at 3:39 PM Paul, your words express the emotional and heartfelt pain so well in this lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 3:45 PM Thank you for the congrats and the lovely feedback, Sandra. Your winning entry proved to be very much to my liking, and I can still picture that special birthday cake with the surprise message! ~ // paul

CayCay Godwin January 4, 2016 at 2:33 PM This is a WOW and I see it won - no wonder. I love it ... CayCay Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 3:18 PM A wow is very meaningful, CayCay:) Thank you for reading and liking! ~~ paul

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 10:21 AM PAUL, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT* Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 11:39 AM Thank you Skat. Pleased to see that you changed your mind:) Hugs // paul

Jeannie Cronin January 4, 2016 at 12:23 AM Hi Paul, just wandering around the site reading catchy titles. Nice one, I love the writes that draw me in right away. Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 11:38 AM You are kind, Jeannie (pronounced like the magic lamp one?:); thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Pleased to have made your acquaintance. ~ All the best for the new year. ~ paul

Balveen Cheema January 3, 2016 at 12:14 PM A sad end!could feel every emotion! Congrats on your win Paul! Paul Callus January 3, 2016 at 2:00 PM It had to be sad, Balveen, with the phrase 'a pitch black room' being among the requisites! Thank you for the lovely feedback and congrats. ~ Regards // paul

Beautiful Scars January 3, 2016 at 10:37 AM Paul..this moved me. You have such a special way of words..You are very talented and I am grateful to have met you here :)-luloo Paul Callus January 3, 2016 at 1:57 PM You are kind and generous, Laura:) Thank you! ...I am so pleased to be on your winners' list. Enjoyed this challenging contest! ~ Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 31, 2015 at 2:57 AM Paul, I like the way your 4 short stanzas gave us a gyst of the story.. not only are the flowers colorful and perfumed but also the shift of shades to the lovers life... =`) I blow you a prayers of Blessed Happy New Year to You and me!!! Hugs!~Olive Eloisa Paul Callus December 31, 2015 at 3:42 AM Thank you Olive_eloi....you read it well:) colours play a main part in this sad drama! ~ Thank you for the prayers, and may I wish you and those close to your heart the very best for a happy and blessed new year. ~ Hugsss ~*~ paul

Kp Nunez December 30, 2015 at 7:22 PM Hi Paul. As always, I am struck by the powerful imagery and deep emotions your words evoke. Wishing you the best in the contest and a great year to you and yours. PS. Here today just to read and greet. PS. Thanks for everything. hugs! Paul Callus December 31, 2015 at 3:00 AM Good morning Kim:) It is lovely to see you back, even if just reading and commenting for a start! Thank you for stopping by with lovely comments and wishes. Let us show the new year that strength of character and positivity can place high on our agenda:) All the best & hugs ~ paul

Eve Roper December 30, 2015 at 5:52 PM Beautiful write, Paul, a winner in my eyes!!! Hugs sweet friend and have a very safe and Happy New Year's Paul Callus December 31, 2015 at 3:03 AM Many thanks to you, Eve, especially for your kindness and continuous support throughout the year, and for sharing your poetic emotions with us! May the new year bring you happiness, serenity and good health. ~ Hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 12:25 PM You always paint a beautiful picture Paul... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~ Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 4:02 PM You too are always good to me, Linda! Thank you for your visits and support:) Wishing you and those close to your heart all the best for the new year. Take care. hugs ~ paul

Nette Onclaud December 30, 2015 at 11:38 AM ohh, the sullen imagery makes this piece so endearing, paul.. another gem!.. hugggs Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 3:59 PM Thank you Nette..you are so kind! In return, I ought to gather my gems and make them into a lovely necklace for you!:) Hugsss // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis December 30, 2015 at 8:10 AM Tragic and romantic! Beautifully done! A seven dear Paul! Just to wish you and your family: Happy New Year! May the Good Lord, grant you health, love, happiness And the realization of each of your dreams! Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 3:51 PM I appreciate your complimentary remarks, my friend! Thank you for all your support! May the new year be a peaceful and happy one for you and all those close to you! // paul

Eileen Manassian December 29, 2015 at 4:19 PM Sad......but beautiful. Poetry that works it's spell. Please check out my latest poem. Also, please read Heather's latest blog about the duet contest. Hugs Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 3:06 PM Thank you Eileen! That poem has gone in my favs and into my personal file; it means a lot to me:) Have read Heather's blog; will enter the contest as well; better do it now before I forget!! Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2015 at 4:08 PM Reads like a winner.. enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sometimes when a mate dies the other person no longer has a will to live..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 2:42 PM So glad that you enjoyed it, Sara! Thank you for the feedback. Always a pleasure to have you visiting. ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison December 29, 2015 at 3:35 PM Beautiful but so sad Paul and I love the clever title - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus December 30, 2015 at 2:37 PM Thank you Jan:) I thought that pink, lilac and blue would go well together! Sheila always harps on the need to match colours when choosing what to wear:) Hugs // paul