Like Olden Times

Turn your doleful eyes to the dimly lit sky The last you'll see of moon and stars is when our shards of fire die. Take hold of me,Don't set me free Your heart won't let you whisper goodbye. Like olden times on the brown horse Let's ride away, by forest lakes into the night, In a log cabin,We'll bathe and sleep to the warm glow of candle-lights. As the wind wafts outside the door, Catch me in your arms ,like autumn leaves catch the first rain, As my slow-hands like dancing flames reach out for you, Through flickering shadows call out my name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Orozco Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 9:01 PM
What a beautiful poem... you have always been a very talented poet. The words used here so prefctly pieced together.. i enjoyed this very much =)
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December 10, 2018 at 2:24 PM
It's the beginning that wraps you and ties you down to the beautiful sensualities of this ever-romantic poem. Love this. "Turn your doleful eyes to the dimly lit sky The last you'll see of moon and stars is when our shards of fire die." Doleful. Sorrowful. Listen to the piece Le Charm by Ernest Chausson. This piece reminds me of that piece. I think that you'd enjoy it very much. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXaFjGLMUKQ
Doll Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Brilliant! The last stanza is romantic perfection, Charmaine. All the best~ Warren
Man Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Charms.. your words ignite passion’s flame. You’re a true romantic and you write with beauty and authenticity!
Mcconnell Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Lovely penned piece Charmaine, so romantic full of great imagery too. Have great weekend,Gordon
Roper Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Charmaine, it is so lovely and romantic; my husband loved the woods and the thought of living in a log cabin. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
Messina Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Sounds like such a romantic place of olden times. He should be saddling up that brown horse after a write like this. Awesome poetry, Charmaine. lovely piece...Charlie
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Awesome write my friend...I like the words used, Charmaine...love & light...^WW^
Man Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 10:42 PM
You charm with sensual delights.. every line a romantic inspiration. Your spirit possess the essence of intimacy!
Flannery Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Beautifully written piece Charmaine. The fears desires of so many hearts stitched so nicely together on this page.
Green Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:55 AM
This is one beautiful poem that really touches the heart and heightens the senses. Absolutely gorgeous my sweet friend. You have painted a picture of love and passion with your wonderfully crafted words. Sigh.
One Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Sensual and romantic words Charmaine... You do this form so well, like the words naturally leave your pen...
Hill Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 12:45 PM
You've painted a wonderful picture Charma. I feel the cool night air as the moon reflects upon the lake's still waters. The silence is broken as the horse hooves stir the soil. Make sure that boy has plenty of apples and carrots to eat when you slip into that tub :) TAH
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thanks for reading ...Your last part of the comment cracked me up :)
Wanter Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Beautiful, Charmaine!
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks Sunlite
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 10:02 PM
An alluring poem of such beautiful longing and enticing imagery, Charmaine. 'As my slow-hands like dancing flames reach out for you' - mesmerizing poetry! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks so much dear Susan.
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September 7, 2018 at 7:54 PM
A lulling beautiful piece Charmaine, a poem to dive in to. xo
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thanks so much.
Smith Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 6:41 PM
So romantic...you paint the perfect picture Charma
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thanks so much Timo.
Pandit Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Delightfully romantic..well delivered!
Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thanks a lot !
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