Like New Litchenstein first 10 minutes WIP
Become a
Premium Member
and post notes and photos about your poem like Di11y Da11y.
I'd like to force myself to write better... Here's the first 10 minutes of writing... Hopefully I'll come back to it. Who knows
*******
The not together strands that lead to demise
But they are oh so beautiful through your eyes
Place me gently so I'm never disturbed
And I'll stay this way, all change curbed
There was the moment that damage occurred
So long gone it's less real more inferred
It's all quiet now let's just sit with the scene
Playing over and over like uninventive dream
To be 'like new' with no sign I was broken
All tentrils of anxiety erased and unspoken
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2024
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment