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I'd like to force myself to write better... Here's the first 10 minutes of writing... Hopefully I'll come back to it. Who knows *******
The not together strands that lead to demise But they are oh so beautiful through your eyes Place me gently so I'm never disturbed And I'll stay this way, all change curbed There was the moment that damage occurred So long gone it's less real more inferred It's all quiet now let's just sit with the scene Playing over and over like uninventive dream To be 'like new' with no sign I was broken All tentrils of anxiety erased and unspoken

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