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Like Many Other African Daughters

She was every girl’s envy Beautiful but pure But now she has H.I.V Deadly with no cure She wonders when And she wonders how Like many other young African daughters It was her very first time A quick thrill She thought it not a crime But now she lives on a pill She wonders when And she wonders how Like many other young African daughters Her parents haven’t been told Neither does her lover know She is not yet that bold And hopes it will never show She wonders when And she wonders how Like many other young African daughters There is also a baby in her womb Who will come to the earth So she thinks about the tomb And whether she should give him birth She wonders when And she wonders how Like many other young African daughters “When will I die?” I tell her; “never” If she accepts Christ She will live forever “How will it end?” I say; “well” If she trusts in Jesus as her friend And drinks from salvation’s well I am not treating her condition lightly But there is a God Who loves this young woman And even when she starts to look unsightly God is still so in love with this young African He knows when And He knows how

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Date: 1/23/2016 2:38:00 PM
Hi Thabisile, As the son of the soil of the mother continent of Africa, Azania to be specific. I am touched by your writing. This disease is. A cause of many problems majorly a reason our continent is not so progressive. Thank you for this poem and I has become one of my favourites.
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Date: 1/21/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thabisile Precious Mlambo, hope to see you post another poem...SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thabisile WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/19/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thabisile,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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