Like Magic

a flower-strewn path dances before her like magic considering the rank seaweed

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/3/2024 6:43:00 PM

VeRy UnIqUe G……. Pangie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/3/2024 7:14:00 PM

It was I who put the 'U' in 'Unicorn.' lol. Thanks, Pangie!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2024 11:31:00 AM

Contrasting imagery! She must be surrounded by stinkers.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2024 7:51:00 AM

A fun story/write. I will take the flowers please. No seaweed for me.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/3/2024 7:25:00 PM

No seaweed, Paula?! Where's your 'inner-Sushi-lover' gone, anyway?! lol. Many blessings, Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 6/3/2024 6:13:00 AM

beauty is in the eye of the beholder....in this case in the eye of the nose holder..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/3/2024 7:28:00 PM

Focus on the flowers, John, the flowers! ~ C. W. Eed

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2024 4:34:00 AM

Interesting turn of events. I am wondering did she leave immediately when the seaweed appeared. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2024 3:10:00 AM

Okay!! I faintly remember him, Gershon. My father would watch him sometimes on TV. Sara K

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/3/2024 7:37:00 PM

I am wondering too... I just write 'em; I don't explain 'em. (~Once heard from Red Skelton, a great American comedian).

Deb M

Date: 6/3/2024 4:12:00 AM

Haha lovely and romantic BB until l got to the ‘rank seaweed’…..funny one my friend! Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/3/2024 7:41:00 PM

Consider the seaweed, Deb. Turn it into sushi! ~ Sunshine and Abra-Cadabra! :) gw