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Like Day and Night

i hold my sorrow till i'm alone to let it go to feel the flow so i don't struggle under pressure anymore i cry at night and smile during the day so i can hold my head up to the people around me and have them believe the words i say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/8/2009 8:31:00 AM
Chamonique, Sad but at least you let it out. It is not good to hold it in. But it would help to talk to someone about it I would think. Great writing.Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2009 1:47:00 AM
this poem makes my heart sink. its very powerful. thats very good. i enjoyed it very much so.
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Date: 7/8/2009 12:02:00 AM
Mmm, it is tough to have such a life pace...sometimes it is ok to feel mouthed gravity in public; nice poem indeed, thanks for sharing =D
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