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Like a Oxygen To Live

like a oxygen to live I still need you like a oxygen to live but you behave like I am no one to you what was mine fault just that i loved you it’s not mine ,it's yours you are the one .., who snubbed me when you left me felt like soul left out my body i have been called stupid i have been called an idiot for falling in love with you and you..! shame on you you don't care about me you were my soul mate once upon I have waited for you but you never even felt that...!

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Date: 7/21/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:18:00 AM
ashwini, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:11:00 PM
ASHWINI, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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