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Like a Game of Chess

A grand display the way she plays the game of love to hearts’ dismay; with shrewd foreplay she stalks her prey expecting that she'll have her way. Like game of chess with quick aggress and strong pursuit she starts to press with deep obsess and skilled finesse to score the king, his crown possess. With knights so grand held in her hand, the pawns and rooks at her command; she'll make her stand, her foe outmanned, her strategy so deftly planned. With game begun she starts her fun and moves her pieces one by one to make him run in hopes to stun until her prey is overrun. But not so fast my lovely lass perhaps her house is made of glass, and with his brass she's met her class, and he will have his piece of her… He’ll take her down and spin her round and leave her pieces on the ground so neatly wound and tightly bound; he'll have his way...still she'll be crowned. Despite their claims of skill and fame, …who has really won this game? She's not to blame, there is no shame, ‘cause deep within they're both the same. February 18, 2020

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Date: 8/22/2021 9:18:00 AM
People I dislike are the game players like these. I can play chess but never in this way. Excellent flow and skillfully written John and enjoyed. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/22/2021 9:46:00 AM
We have all know people like this who use others for gain and pleasure; I don't care much for them either. I have to believe that people like this, whose only satisfaction in life is winning the "game," must actually be quite lonely on the inside. Hugs, John
Date: 10/21/2020 6:16:00 AM
I love this John! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2020 6:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/20/2020 6:18:00 PM
Wow, John, I love your version of the game contest. A fav. A very well deserved placement my friend. I use to play in my younger years, but it wears my brain down to read the whole board and think what the other person is going to do. Not an easy game for me.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2020 2:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, I’m glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for saving it to your favorites. John
Date: 10/20/2020 3:10:00 PM
Brilliant use of crafting the pronoun to predispose your well-played approach, John, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, William, I glad you liked it. Thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 3/24/2020 11:23:00 AM
John: You write with a fine pen. I found this very "entertaining", maybe "enjoyable" is a better word. Anyway: Well done. Keep them coming. Thank you for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thanks, Buck, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/17/2020 6:16:00 AM
Ooh, a lot of fun, this game of chess! Love it, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/17/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, glad you enjoyed this playful little game of chess. Hugs, John
Date: 3/6/2020 5:20:00 PM
Guess for the people who participate in relationships with game-playing deserve each other in the long run. Well-written. You are definitely a word-smith and deep-thinker.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thank you for your comments and visit, Gail, I am actually an accountant by trade, a numbers guy, so to be called a word-smith is a high honor for me, thank you! John
Date: 3/4/2020 5:50:00 PM
Nicely done, John, great flow, rhyme , and theme. I guess life is like a chess game.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/5/2020 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 2/25/2020 12:08:00 PM
Very cleverly constructed and composed. Excellent work. Enjoyed it.
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/26/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thanks, Kenneth, I appreciate the kind comments. John
Date: 2/19/2020 10:44:00 PM
A master's class on internal rhyme and the intricacies of a chess match! Well done, John
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2020 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 2/18/2020 9:51:00 PM
Dangerous moments indeed. Who knew Chess could be so- "Adventurous!" I love everything about this my dear friend. You certainly know how to "Play the game." ;) Winking at You. I shall place this in my favorites. Just because. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/19/2020 7:54:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, B, sometimes it is exciting to be adventurous and live dangerously, care to join me? ;) Thank you for the fave and for always supporting my writing, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Hugs, John
Date: 2/18/2020 6:45:00 PM
I don't know any thing really about chess, but WELL Played!!! That last line was awesome. I wrote a poem with similar message a long time ago and I ended also that underneath "they're both the same"
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/19/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I always appreciate hearing your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 2/18/2020 6:28:00 PM
beautifully written and brilliantly rhymed, john!
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/19/2020 4:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ilene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/18/2020 2:30:00 PM
Like how you wove the chess pieces into your smooth flowing verse John. Hope alls well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/18/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments. Things are quite busy in my world right now and they will be through April 15th, I keep asking myself why I don't go ahead and retire. John

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