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Like a Child

Like a Child Like a child you tenderly gather me into the soft folds of the nourishing feast of forgiveness. A shivering lamb living in the distraught, existing in my sparse pastures where only weeds of gorse grow. Where the famine of regret sees me toddle off again into realms of the bleak – kingdoms of hungry drought deaf to your shout of hope. Like a shepherd find me there wallowing in my foolishness. Speak your gentle invitation to me to lay my head upon your broad shoulders in strong caresses open to every cherished lamb returned to your deeply lived Eden aglow with the grace of starlit blessings luminescent with peace in night’s ever evolving, unfinished psalms, wilderness’ fabled poems. In your arms love awaits its turn to glow for this child from a starry perch and capture eternal delight in loveliness’ caress. And like a lamb child, feasting in the technicolor of mercy, robe my scattered heart with your ever-present seamless robe when prophecy shears old wool leaving a new nakedness where wisdom lingers in soft bleating dawns and the promise of your compassion soothes in the cool of the twilight. Like a child I reach to touch the first evening star climbing into your generous lap, the eternal shepherd, to sigh in the corralled contented compassion for this rogue lamb. Amen! adrift on sharp cliffs lone lamb braces for whirlwinds ~ love sends guiding stars 7-12-22 Contest: Like a Child Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 7/23/2022 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved shining win and this excellent lovely poem my dear friend Sam! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Date: 7/23/2022 1:06:00 PM
So much love, Sam ~ your poem is truly beautiful. I especially love ~ the technicolor of mercy ~ where wisdom lingers in soft bleating dawns, and your lovely Haiku.
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Date: 7/21/2022 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, Sam! Your Haibun was excellent form of poetry, well written with a soulful message. Blessings my friend, Bill
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Date: 7/21/2022 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Yours was my favorite Like A Child entry. Amen! ~Anaya
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Date: 7/21/2022 10:18:00 AM
Back to Congratulate to win on your most deserving poem . Best Wishes
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Anisha! I feel so humbled and honored by your thoughtful visits and your note of congratulations! All the best! Blessings!
Date: 7/21/2022 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a powerful/wonderful write. Loved your ending. The "first evening star" is always the best one of the night. Have a blessed day................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:26:00 AM
Paula, many thanks! It is an honor to be on the winners list among so many profound poems. You are so right, "the first evening star" is the best wishing star. How I loved doing just that as a child. Sounds like I have found a kindred soul! Blessings to you my friend!
Date: 7/21/2022 4:06:00 AM
Stay safe and well protected like a child in the loving embrace of the Heavenly Father.... ! Lovely penning.... Congratulations Sam on your great win
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:21:00 AM
Valsa, thank you many times over! I kept thinking about Ps. 131 - like a weaned child - which is one of my favorites. It seemed to express so perfectly how I feel. There are also references to a song I wrote - Jesus Met Me at the Door. Truly we are protected children in the arms of God. Sending you many blessings my friend!
Date: 7/21/2022 3:43:00 AM
Beautiful writing addressing the power above. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:14:00 AM
Many heartfelt thanks coming your way Chris. I wasn't sure how I would approach this theme and then, quite suddenly, the words flowed. So glad you liked it. Blessings!
Date: 7/21/2022 2:28:00 AM
This is simply brilliant. So difficult to choose in this contest. So many amazing writes. Love this so. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:22:00 AM
Forgot to mention how influenced this haibun was by Ps. 131 - like a weaned child.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/21/2022 10:12:00 AM
Gina, a heartfelt thank you not only for your placement but for your challenge to reach deeply into the soul of my inner child. Thank you for this opportunity to share! It is a true honor to be on this winners list. And thank you for all that you do here in the "soup!" Sending you blessings and a hug dear friend! PS - love the new picture!
Date: 7/14/2022 9:36:00 AM
in my foolishness... powerful... Great imagery. Excellent writing. Ann
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/14/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Ann. I didn't think I could write on this theme then, quite suddenly, it all came together! Talk about foolishness! I am so glad you liked it and am so grateful for your visit! Gave my day a hug and a :D! Sending you blessings!
Date: 7/13/2022 9:54:00 PM
Your composition definitely demands great literary value and top ranking. But I am not a religious person. Traditional religious preaching taught me that Human beings are children of God and ultimate shelter is HIS lap!. That faith was embedded in childhood. But now my knowledge comes from analytic rational scientific perception and I know very well that God ( HE or SHE) is neither the creator nor the Administrator of the world. So I cannot feel in this way. Love. Stay Strong n Healthy.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/16/2022 10:43:00 PM
Just have a thorough read the Book “Origin of Species” By Robert Charles Darwin Love
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/14/2022 10:08:00 AM
Anisha, thank you so much for your thoughtful and thought provoking message. I so appreciate the time you took to share your beliefs with me. It seems to me we view the "analytic" and "scientific" from two different perspectives. I see these worlds as reflections of God. Have you read de Chardin - a French philosopher and scientist? He wrote The Phenomenon of Man, Hymn of the Universe, The Divine Milieu? I have to admit I can read about one page then have to go think about it for weeks. Would love to continue our discussion! Sending you prayers and blessings.

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