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Like Children

LIKE CHILDREN Ducks paddle furiously Playing extra hard Like kids out too late Desperate to enjoy each moment Before mum calls them in - In winter when their river is Frozen into cold limbo

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Date: 11/14/2010 12:55:00 PM
Sydney, comparing ducks to children is really fitting. As a matter of fact, paddling ducks fascinates children. And you are very observant to notice the desperation exhibited by kids at play before mum calls.
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