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Lightning

Looks like another storm, looping round being formed, labyrinth of tempest, loud thunder cloud tenet, lightning striking bulls eye, like torches the tree's fry, liquid drops from the sky. 4-13-17

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 2:58:00 PM

Like the "labyrinth of tempest" line! Congratulations on your win Cheryl! :-)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/27/2017 6:59:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mark; placement was a nice surprise!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:30:00 PM

Nicely written , Cheryl, congratulations on your win. ~*

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/22/2017 10:18:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Eve; appreciate it!~Che :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2017 10:19:00 PM

Cheryl, great descriptive write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/19/2017 7:01:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment and placing me as one of the wins Kim! Blessings back~Che :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/18/2017 7:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/18/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thanks so much (am sounding like a broken record, lol!) for very kind comment and visit Agnes; placement was a nice surprise!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 5:33:00 AM

Congrats, Cheryl! Storm's are fascinating!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/18/2017 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; placement was a nice surprise!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:47:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/18/2017 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ann-Lise; placement was a nice surprise!~hugs Che :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 4/17/2017 3:53:00 PM

This is wonderful!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/17/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)