Get Your Premium Membership

Lightning

Dark storm clouds gather Thunder rolls down the valley The mountain Gods speak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/28/2009 9:00:00 PM
Hey When did YOU hear the mountain gods speak the thunder really does roll down the valley and just like bowling it's a strike LOVE YOUR POETIC MIND LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Login to Reply
Date: 11/28/2009 2:38:00 PM
Powerful Haiku Barbara >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2009 7:42:00 AM
I hear the roll on the tympani...powerful music. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2009 7:48:00 PM
Powerful Haiku, Barbara. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you a Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2009 7:16:00 PM
BG we must be on the same wave length..this great haiku is exactly the way I felt last night with the brutal and scary storm N.J. got hit with... God protects as we expect.. but I was shivering in my bed... thankxxx for your kind comments on my November Storm... am luving this one all the way to my favs... blessings ... luv ..Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2009 3:41:00 AM
Nice haiku, Barbara (Soupmail, soon)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2009 11:55:00 PM
Good work BG,thanks for soupmail advice.Enjoy the book.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2009 6:58:00 PM
great haiku. i love writing and reading them as it doesnt take too long :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2009 6:48:00 PM
can hear and feel it! BG! nice! jimbo
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things