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Lighthouse

the lighthouse stands by the edge of the sea-
  a solid tower guarding the forbidding highway of ships
          a picture of quiet tranquility in an eternal war of sea and shore
then a gasp-  as clouds swirl like sheets and thunder claps giant hands
       the wind is roaring across the restless emptiness of steel blue water
   and foaming waves crash against lighthouse trying to rock his foundation
but lighthouse holds on tight as forked lightning moves across the sky
                       the whole sky lights up for a moment . . . 
      the storm is violent and determined to topple lighthouse into the sea
          but he digs deep into the jagged rocks (this is not his first storm) 
as rain pours in torrents- the sea surging and falling back . . . 
                  the fury of waves, a  chorus of  voices screaming
               threatening, raging, lashing into lighthouse like a wild banshee-
thunder and wild winds-   in time drift to  sea and lighthouse utters a sigh . . . 

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July 26, 2017


Poetry/Verse/lighthouse
Copyright Protected, ID 17-1089-309-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, End of November, 2018 Standard
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thanks Tim for visiting my poem with the ...Wow ~
Mcguire Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Well, WELL written! Wow Wonderful!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:00 AM
~.~
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December 4, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Brenda for the congrats ~
La France Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Jack, Pixie, and Paul for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
Horne Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 8:56 AM
love this one, my friend - great descriptions. hope you & Snuggles are having a great week x
La France Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 6:00 PM
:-) Me and Snuggles Cat are doing great !!!
Rose  Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 5:53 PM
I always adored light houses and all that they represent. You describe it so well and give it a wonderful tribute . May its light shine in your heart forever and a day Dear Heart xo
La France Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:58 PM
:-)
Callus Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 11:48 AM
This poem is beautiful, with great imagery and exuding powerful movement entwined with strong emotions. I go a step further as I look at it with metaphorical eyes. ~ Regards // paul
La France Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:58 PM
:-)
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Chris, Victor, Kim, and San for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
Green Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:26 AM
There is something so romantic about a light house standing so majestically on the shore line. This was beautiful and I could hear the furious winds blowing and the angry waves crashing against its form as I read this. Nicely done.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:39 AM
:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:00 PM
The emotions of a lighthouse! Love the imGery, Constance!
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:38 AM
:)
Blown Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:29 PM
there's some dear heart in that write... captivating
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:38 AM
:)
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