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the lighthouse stands by the edge of the sea- a solid tower guarding the forbidding highway of ships a picture of quiet tranquility in an eternal war of sea and shore then a gasp- as clouds swirl like sheets and thunder claps giant hands the wind is roaring across the restless emptiness of steel blue water and foaming waves crash against lighthouse trying to rock his foundation but lighthouse holds on tight as forked lightning moves across the sky the whole sky lights up for a moment . . . the storm is violent and determined to topple lighthouse into the sea but he digs deep into the jagged rocks (this is not his first storm) as rain pours in torrents- the sea surging and falling back . . . the fury of waves, a chorus of voices screaming threatening, raging, lashing into lighthouse like a wild banshee- thunder and wild winds- in time drift to sea and lighthouse utters a sigh . . . ________________________ July 26, 2017 Poetry/Verse/lighthouse Copyright Protected, ID 17-1089-309-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, End of November, 2018 Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 12/5/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Tim for visiting my poem with the ...Wow ~
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Date: 12/4/2018 7:33:00 PM
Well, WELL written! Wow Wonderful!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 10:00:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Brenda for the congrats ~
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Date: 11/29/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Jack, Pixie, and Paul for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/29/2018 8:56:00 AM
love this one, my friend - great descriptions. hope you & Snuggles are having a great week x
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2018 6:00:00 PM
:-) Me and Snuggles Cat are doing great !!!
Date: 11/28/2018 5:53:00 PM
I always adored light houses and all that they represent. You describe it so well and give it a wonderful tribute . May its light shine in your heart forever and a day Dear Heart xo
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2018 5:58:00 PM
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Date: 11/28/2018 11:48:00 AM
This poem is beautiful, with great imagery and exuding powerful movement entwined with strong emotions. I go a step further as I look at it with metaphorical eyes. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/29/2018 5:58:00 PM
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Chris, Victor, Kim, and San for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:26:00 AM
There is something so romantic about a light house standing so majestically on the shore line. This was beautiful and I could hear the furious winds blowing and the angry waves crashing against its form as I read this. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:39:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:00:00 PM
The emotions of a lighthouse! Love the imGery, Constance!
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
:)
Date: 11/27/2018 7:29:00 PM
there's some dear heart in that write... captivating
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
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