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Lightening and Thunder

A sullen canvas of white pewter and black gray a flash of brilliance utters a word of dismay a radiant dance indeed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 2:39:00 PM
A beautiful descriptions of the power of the lightening storm, Rick. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:22:00 AM
Nice expressions with nice images. Good luck
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Date: 5/20/2010 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Rick Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/20/2010 2:45:00 PM
This is GREAT!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:50:00 PM
very nice!! enjoyed!!
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:05:00 PM
This one is descriptive and evocative. I think that you will do well with this. Stark and precise. I like it. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 5/20/2010 11:15:00 AM
Excellent description of lightening flashing through a dark sky
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