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Light In the Shadows

Empty city streets at 3 A.M. A lone youth walks towards her home She staggers a bit having drunk a little too much There is no one with her and when she lights up a cigarette a shadow appears briefly on the sidewalk It doesn't seem that she will have trouble Fortunately the streets are deserted Walking slowly home She coughs from the cigarette smoke And finds her way home under the shining streetlamps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/15/2018 6:15:00 PM
I love the way you have formatted the poem Matthew, you created an atmosphere of foreboding with the deep dark imagery - least it was only the shadow that was following :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2018 12:27:00 PM
Matthew, an awesome snapshot of a lonely troubled youth with only her shadow as a brief companion on her tipsy walk home.. great atmospheric imagery sets the striking mood. Loved it!
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Date: 4/5/2018 11:08:00 PM
Nicely done, It goes along with my "Hell Found Me" poem. Thanks for coming to read my Lighting Strikes :)
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:36:00 PM
- You wrote a picture of loneliness for me, great written Matthew - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 7:25:00 PM
oh, I thought this was going to turn into a horror story. If it were my poem, it probably would have. Especially it being New York late at night!! Matt, you mentioned eternity in a comment to me. I hope you believe a heaven awaits you!
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