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Light And Darkness

Light seems brightest when seen in the darkest dark.
Yet darkness can be all but eliminated by the brightness of light.
When in a balanced contrast, each is often seen clearer.

Although their differences when compared are quite stark,
Both darkness and light have the potential to provide great insight.
Each has qualities that can make things seem dearer.

Once while meditating on a bench in the park,
I had a sensation of my soul taking flight.
Wisdom and Truth suddenly seem nearer.

Through space and time, I flew like a lark.
I tried to remain there with all my might.
Guided by the light, I wasn’t the steerer.

From darkness or light, the Truth we’ll still see.
Truth is at home inside both you and me.
Guiding us through life to our destiny.

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Maria Williams August 2, 2025 at 7:08 AM Bill, your poem beautifully captures the delicate dance between darkness and light—how each reveals the truth in its own profound way. I especially love the moment where you describe your soul taking flight; it felt so serene and transcendent, like a glimpse into something far beyond the physical. Your reflections are deeply grounding yet spiritually elevating...Hugs Bill Baker August 3, 2025 at 11:14 AM I often lay on my bed at night and allow my spirit to ascent into the sparkling stars I see with my eyes shut. I float about in the wonders of space and listen for the words that ears can't here. I see things that eyes can't see, and they are revelations to me. I have an uncanny will to stay there in the peaceful beauty of Love. Blessings my friend, Bill

Valsa George August 2, 2025 at 3:21 AM This esoteric or extra- terrestrial experience you had, beautifully illustrates that both light and darkness have their distinct qualities. Darkness in itself is not contemptible. In fact darkness accentuates light and both can reveal truth. When light guides us, we are not the steerers.... it carves its own path. Profound thoughts, dear Bill. Bill Baker August 3, 2025 at 11:09 AM And a profound comment my wise friend. Thanks for the meaningful responses to my poetry, Valsa. I hope you are well, and your life is filled with peace. Hugs, Bill

Victor Buhagiar August 1, 2025 at 10:46 PM When anger controls our soul, we lose sight of the truth. It behoves us to search for God's truth be there be light or darkness. Truth leads to bliss. Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 11:01 PM Thank you for your mindful comment, Victor. Always good to have you visit, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 1, 2025 at 7:14 PM So meaningful and deep, your poem is beautifully written and touching, Bill. It was a pleasure to read this. Blessings. Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 11:03 PM Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry, Evelyn. Come again soon, my friend. Bill

Joseph P. DiMino August 1, 2025 at 6:05 PM Absolutely! All truth is already inside of us, apart of us. Mystic oneness with God is a beautiful practice. In the Silence, all is still...now I know the meaning of a word-drop, and the mystic voice of eternal sea. Great read, Bill. Thank you for sharing. Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 11:04 PM Always happy to see you've paid my poetry a visit, my friend. Thanks for the meaningful comments, Joe. Cheers! Bill

Regina Elliott August 1, 2025 at 5:20 PM Hi Bill, this wise and wonderful poem causes one to contemplate the universe. A superior creation of writing. You and Sara have a mellow early August evening. God's blessings :) Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 11:05 PM Oh, thank you Regina, we will. Smiles ~ Blessings from us both my dear. Bill

sara Etgen-Baker August 1, 2025 at 4:33 PM your poem is deeply profound and one given to you from God. Such insight and wisdom are woven in your flowing lines. I think this is one of your better poems, seriously! I've had a similar experience when I wasn't the steerer...changed me completely. Thanks for sharing your spirit and soul, Sara Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 11:07 PM I'm all yours Sara. Whether here or there, or everywhere, I'll always be with you, my love. Hugs, Bill