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Light Aglow

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ray aglow peeping in through my window a thin strip on floor dancing, prancing, waltzing abysmal luminous lightning in dark sky strike horizon somber orb stars gleam hushed September 3, 2021 Used my created form "MERSE" - Two descriptive, increasing and decreasing stanzas (1 to 6 syllables, and vice versa) Strand - Dec. 30 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Beata Agustin
Date: 9/7/2021 11:15:00 PM
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Wow! Thanks for sharing this... I hope to write one, though I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/7/2021 5:51:00 PM
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Dearest Mala, the beauty of your imagery is striking and your appreciation of Nature in all Her glory is so very inspiring, my lovely friend. My heart is aglow in the sky-full radiance of this lovely piece. A grand example for your contest, dear poetess. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/3/2021 10:56:00 PM
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Fall Aglow. Will try your contest. Love
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2021 4:29:00 AM
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Dear Anisha, thanks for visiting. Truly glad you are going to try my new form.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2021 12:17:00 PM
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Hello Mala, you paint a beautiful scene with your words. Love & Friendship Drlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2021 10:02:00 AM
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Hello Mala, the scenery is beautiful. Love & Friendship. Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2021 4:28:00 AM
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Dear Darlene, thanks for visiting my poem. Really glad you liked the scenery.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/3/2021 11:21:00 AM
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very nice! congrats on your new format! It works well!!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2021 4:28:00 AM
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Dear Krish, Thanks for visiting my page. So glad you enjoyed the new form!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2021 10:40:00 AM
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Mala, another great example of your created form, so beautifully penned, hope I can pen a poem worthy ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2021 4:27:00 AM
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Thanks, Constance. So glad you enjoyed my humble effort.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/3/2021 7:40:00 AM
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Lovely imagery Mala, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2021 4:26:00 AM
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Thanks, Tom. So glad you enjoyed!

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